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My friend names Ula. She’s 17 and she’s Polish. She lives in Szczecinek. She studies of High School. She has green eyes and long fair hair. She always smiles and she’s very intelligent, but sometimes she’s has bad day too. She loves cooking in her kitchen and does it great. She loves meeting with friends and listen music. She likes dancehall and gangsta rap. She can volleyball and handball. We like go to the billiards at the weekend with ours friends. She is always when somebody need her, because she likes to help. She doesn’t like reading books. I like her because I can tell her everything and we need we each other.

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My friend'S 'names' NAME IS Ula.
She studies 'of' (zle slowo) High School.
She always smiles and she's very intelligent, but sometimes
'she's has' (* SHE IS HAS - po jakiemu to jest?) (przedimek) bad day too. She loves cooking in her kitchen and does it 'great' (zla czesc mowy). She loves meeting with friends and 'listen' (zle slowo) (tu cos brakuje) music.
We like 'go' (tu cos brakuje) to the billiards at the weekend with 'ours' (zle slowo, poszukaj roznice pomiedzy OUR i ourS) friends.
She is always (ale GDZIE?) when somebody 'need' (dostosuj czasownik do rzeczownika) her, because she likes to help. I like her because I can tell her everything and we need 'we' (po co to tutaj jest?) each other.
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My friend name is Ula. / tak to zrozumiałam xD/
She's 17 and she's Polish.
She lives in Szczecinek.
She studies IN High School.
She has green eyes and long fair hair.
She always smiles and she's very intelligent, but sometimes she has bad day too./'she's' - błąd zobaczyłam dopiero po dodaniu tekstu/
She loves cooking in her kitchen and does it great. /nie wiem jaka może być tutaj część mowy, bo zaczęłam się uczyć dopiero, co widać ;P/
She loves meeting with friends and listenS music. /brakuje 's'?/
She likes dancehall and gangsta rap.
She can volleyball and handball.
We like goING to the billiards at the weekend with our friends. / teraz już wiem, przymiotnik a zaimek posiadania/
She is always there when somebody need her, because she likes to help. /tak dobrze? czy lepiej zdanie 'She always know when somebosy needs her' ?/
She doesn't like reading books.
I like her because I can tell her everything and need each other. /powtórzenie niezamierzone :)/

Dzięki ;D
a! My friend's name is Ula. Juuuż wiem dlaczego ;D

She loves meeting with friends and listenS music. - chyba jednak listenING

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