Sprawdzenie tekstu o systemach politycznych PL-UK

Jak wyżej... :)

I think the political system in Poland is similar to the political system in the UK. In Britain everybody aged 18 or older can vote to decide the next government, it's the same as in Poland. But in Britain the general elections are every five years and in Poland - every four years. Both of the countries have something else in common - there are the Parliaments consisted of two houses - the House of Commons and the House of Lords in the Great Britain, the Seym and the Senate in Poland.The other similarity is that before the elections politics campaign for people's votes by TV, posters and radio. But there are also a few differences between these two political systems. the head of state in the Great Britain, which is a constitutional monarchy, is queen Elizabeth 2nd. In Poland the head of state is the president. The other difference is that in the UK local elections are often at the same time as the general eletions. In Poland these two types of elections don't depends each other.

Z góry dziękuję! :)

But in Britain the general elections are every 'five years' (nie calkowicie prawda, 5years to maximum, pamietam jak jednego roku byly az 2 elections) and in Poland - every four years. Both of the countries have something else in common - 'there are' (niepotr) the Parliaments 'consisted' CONSIST of two houses - the House of Commons and the House of Lords in 'the' (niepotr) Great Britain, the Seym and the Senate in Poland.The other similarity is that before the elections 'politics' (nie tutaj POLITICIANS campaign for people's votes by TV, posters and radio.
The Head of State in 'the' (co Cie wzielo do tego 'the') Great Britain, which is a constitutional monarchy, is Queen Elizabeth '2nd' (nie piszemy tego tak, po pierwsze Queen - zawsze duza litera QElizabeth II). In Poland the Head of State is the President.(duza litera)
The other difference is that in the UK local elections are often at the
same time as the general 'eletions' (nie, to nie jest prawda, local elections sa kazdego roku, a general kiedy im pasuje). In Poland these two types of
>lections don't 'depends' (tutaj masz l. mn-elections, to dlaczego uzywasz czasown. 3os.l.poj?) (tu brakuje slowa) each other.

Z tym depends to literówka, zauważyłam jak już wysłałam ;) Elizabeth 2nd to uproszczenie, bo będę ten tekst mówić, a nie pisać ;) z "the/a/an" ciągle mam problem... Co do tych informacji, które są błędne, to pochodzą z mojego podręcznika do angielskiego, więc chyba tak zostawię jednak, najwyżej mi się oberwie, ale wtedy pokażę dowody w podręczniku :) Chodziło mi głównie o sprawdzenie czy ten tekst jest poprawny gramatycznie i czy da się z niego czegoś dowiedzieć :D Dzięki jeszcze raz! :*