sprawdzenie opisu wakacji^^

bardzo prosiłabym o sprawdzenie tej pracy. zależy mi żeby do wieczora już ktoś odpisał

z góry dziękuję ;*

These holidays passed for me very quickly. In july for three weeks I was at my friend in Legnica. In august we went to Warszawa for two weeks together. Most time we spend at the disco but we saw a lot of monuments too. Next week we spend at the Polish sea in Ustka. We lived in holidays cottage where we had a lot of problems, for example there was not light. later I got back home. I helped my mom and grandma. I remember the most concert ostr. The concert was in my birthday. I think my holidays was cool.

In 'july' (zawsze duza litera) for three weeks I was at my 'friend' (tutaj trzeba 'friend's) in Legnica. In 'august' (duza litera zawsze na miesiace) (daj to 'together' tutaj) we went to 'Warszawa' (ale to jest po polsku, napisz ang wersje) for two weeks 'together' (to nie powinno byc na koncu zdania...). Most OF THE time we spend at the disco but we saw a lot of monuments too. 'Next week' (nie, to jest zle- tutaj musi byc. THE FOLLOWING WEEK) we 'spend' SPENT (uwazaj na to) at the Polish seaSIDE in Ustka. We lived in A 'holidays' HOLIDAY cottage where we had a lot of problems, for example there was'NT ANY 'not' (niepotr) light.
I remember the most concert 'ostr' (nie rozumiem co to ma byc- napisz w calosci). The concert was 'in' ON my birthday. I think THAT my holidays 'was' (ale jak dajesz 'holidays'-to l. mnoga, dostosuj czasownik do l. mn) cool.