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Hi. My name is Julia. I was born in Gdańsk on 20.08.1994. I don't like going to the school, but my favorite subjects it is P.E. and math. In leisure I like sleeping or listening music. My favorite band it is Patamore. When they will in poland I will come to the their concert with my best friends. It is my dream. I often visit my best friends Monika. I like to spend time with her. We know each other for eleven uears. Anoder my best friend is Paulina. She is very similar to me. I have family that i love. I like my life and i don't change it.

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Hi. My name is Julia. I was born in Gdańsk on 20.08.1994. I don't like going to school, but my favorite subjects are P.E. and math. In leisure I like sleeping or listening to music. My favorite band is Patamore. When they will be in poland I will come to their concert with my best friends. It is my dream. I often visit my best friend Monika. I like spending time with her. We know each other for eleven years. Another my best friend is Paulina. She is very similar to me. I have family that i love. I like my life and i don't like to change it.

Hi. My name is Julia. I was born in Gdańsk on 20.08.1994. I don't like going to school, but my favorite subjects are P.E. and math. In leisure I like sleeping or listening to music. My favorite band is Patamore. When they will be in poland I will come to their concert with my best friends. It is my dream. I often visit my best friend Monika. I like spending time with her. We know each other for eleven years. Another my best friend is Paulina. She is very similar to me. I have family that i love. I like my life and i don't like to change it.

>Hi. My name is Julia. I was born in Gdańsk on 20.08.1994. I don't
>like going to school, but my favorite subjects are P.E. and math. In
>leisure I like sleeping or listening to music. My favorite band is
>Patamore. When they ARE in Poland I will GO to their concert
>with my best friends. It is my dream. I often visit my best friend
>Monika. I like spending time with her. We HAVE knowN each other for eleven
>years. Another best friend is Paulina (to zdanie mi nie pasuje, ale nie mam pomyslu na razie). She is very similar to me. I
>have A family that I love. I like my life and i don't WANT to change it.

Jeszcze zamiana wszystkich 'i' na duże 'I' ;)

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