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Dear Anna
Sorry I had not written for so long , but I got good news for you .Mike met a girl .Her name is Monica .They met in the elevator in the shopping center .She is really beautiful blonde with blue eyes and body like a model all in all she is perfect girl .Monica is nice , talkactive and even smart as the blonde ,but one thing in monica annoying me :she is inresponsible , because she often lose something .Before he met her , he had never been in a serious relationship .Although they have been together for like couple weeks I think tat she loves him and makes him happy .I wish them luck .What do you think about it ?
write as soon as you can .great

prosze o odpowiedz .

Według mnie ( przykładowo to zdanie) :.Although they have been together for A couple OF weeks, itp.
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 17 wrz 2013


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