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Healthy food pyramid (also known as
health pyramid, the nutritional pyramid or proper nutrition pyramid) came into being in order to determine what products you should eat often and which rarely. The pyramid is a kind of concept of healthy nutrition.
It should change our eating habits and remember to choose healthy foods. The pyramid consists of several levels which correspond to specific products.
Food products used in human nutritions. food can be divided into:
unprocessed food- intended for direct consumption natural for example: fruit, vegetables etc.
processed food- unnatural preserved products. for example : canned food , jam etc.

Preservatives inhibit the growth of bacteria, fungi and including mold .
All preservatives added to the products are on “ E-numbers”. Preservatives have a range of numbers from E200 to E299.

Is the word "no preservatives" is true ?
The packaging of various products we can find information on whether the product contains such substances. Inscription “ not preservatives” tells us that the product doesn't have this type of substance. That's not true! They have this substance but under another name!
Cytat: KarolciaLe
Prosze sprawdzić czy jest poprawie niepisane :)

THE Healthy food pyramid (also known as
health pyramid, the nutritional pyramid or proper nutrition pyramid) came into being CAME ABOUT in order to determine what products you should eat often and which rarely. The pyramid is a kind of concept of healthy nutrition.
It should change our eating habits and remember PIRAMIDA POWINNA PAMIĘTAĆ? to choose healthy foods. The pyramid consists of several levels which correspond to specific products.
Food products used in human nutritions TO NIE JEST ZDANIE. food can be divided into:
unprocessed food- intended for direct consumption natural for example: fruit, vegetables etc.
processed food- unnatural TAK MIALAS NAPISAC 'NIENATURALNE PRODUKTY'? preserved products. for example : canned food , jam etc.

Preservatives inhibit the growth of bacteria, fungi and including = I OBEJMUJĄC mold .
All preservatives added to the products are on NIE ROZUMIEM “ E-numbers”. Preservatives have a range of numbers from E200 to E299.

Is the word "no preservatives" is true NIEGRAMATYCZNE - PODWOJNY CZASOWNIK ?
The packaging of various products we can find information OPAKOWANIE ROZNYCH PRODUKTOW MOZEMY ZNALEZC INFORMACJE on whether the product contains such substances. THE LABEL “ not=NIE preservatives” tells us that the product doesn't have this type of substance. That's not true! They have this substance CHODZI O JEDNA SUBSTANCJE? but under another name!
It should change our eating habits and remember PIRAMIDA POWINNA PAMIĘTAĆ? to choose healthy foods. ( Ma być przypominać o zdrowym żywieniu)
processed food- unnatural ( w postaci nienaturalnej)

All preservatives added to the products are on NIE ROZUMIEM “ E-numbers”. Preservatives have a range of numbers from E200 to E299. ( Wszystkie konserwanty dodawane do produktów spożywczych znajdują się na tzw " Liscie E"
Is the word "no preservatives" is true NIEGRAMATYCZNE - PODWOJNY CZASOWNIK ? ( ma być : czy napis "brak konserwantów" to prawda ?
the packaging of various products we can find information( na opakowaniach możemy znaleźć informacje czy produkt zawiera takie substancje.
They have this substance CHODZI O JEDNA SUBSTANCJE? but under another name! ( chodzI o kilka substancji)
to siwetnie, ze wiesz, co chcialas napisac; teraz po prostu napisz to wszystko po angielsku.
np. przypominac zamiast pamietac itp.
jak bym wiedziała jak napisać to bym chyba nie prosiła o sprawdzenie tutaj tylko odrazu bym napisała dobrze , ale dzięki.. ;)
Skoro napisalas tyle zdan prawie dobrze, to z tymi poprawkami tez sobie poradzisz.
It should change our eating habits and remind to choose healthy foods.
All preservatives are located on “ E-numbers”
On The packaging of various products we can find information.
a teraz?
przypominac KOMUS
drugie zdanie nadal nie ma sensu
trzecie ok
Is the word "no preservatives" is true a jak ma byc to ?
jezeli nie potrafisz poprawic tego pytania, to znaczy, ze nie pracowalas samodzielnie
no wiadomo że sobie pomagałam i skoro tu napisałam to oznacza, że nie ze wszystkim sobie poradziłam
translatory mnie nie interesuja. Albo pracujesz samodzielnie, albo nie pomagam.
czyli zamiast drugiego is mam dać it ?
nie
Do the world "any preservatives" is true?
Karolcia, no jak ... nie zgaduj tylko się zastanów
jak powiesz po angielsku: "czy to jest prawdziwe?"?
is that real?
edytowany przez KarolciaLe: 27 lis 2013
też się zastanawiam właśnie nad tym pytaniem: "czy to jest prawdziwe?"
ale ja bym szczerze mówiąc napisała Is it real.
Chociaż teraz przy wersji Karolci moja wydaje mi się błędna
Np
Is the statement "no preservatives" true?
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