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Tekst pt. My idea of holidays. Zadanie domowe z angielskiego. Bardzo bardzo proszę Was o przeczytanie tego i poprawienie błedów. Z góry dziękuję najserdeczniej jak tylko potrafię.
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During my holidays I would love to go to Spain, which is known for its fantastic beaches, lots of sunshine and beautiful scenery. Its coast is a perfect place for leisure and relaxation where I could enjoy beaches with warm waters and sunbathe.
Of course, Spain has to offer much more than sun and sand. It has beautiful cities and I’d especially like to visit two most famous ones – the capital of the country and Barcelona. I would have an opportunity to meet local people, really get to know their culture and do a lot of sightseeing: stroll the Ramblas and see the unfinished Sagrada Família Cathedral in Barcelona, visit the world famous El Prado Museum, Royal Palace and Puerta del Sol square in Madrid. A trip to Madrid would not be complete if I did not see a bullfight and a Flamenco show.
Another attraction would be a nightlife in Madrid. I’d go out on the city and enjoy myself until the morning in bars, discos and cafees, which have a tremendous atmosphere.
After this journey I wolud like to go to a small island on the Pacific ocean, where civilisation haven’t reached yet and (where there?) is no hordes of tourists, no telephones and no noisy TV nearby. In such a place I would get awy from crowds, fuss and all trubles.

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My ideal holiday
Its coast is a perfect place for leisure and relaxation where I could enjoy
beaches with warm waters and sunbathING.
Of course, Spain has MUCH MORE to offer than JUST sun, SEA and sand. It has
beautiful cities and I'd especially like to visit two OF THE most famous ..
Another attraction would be THE nightlife in Madrid. I'd go out TO the
city and enjoy myself until the morning in bars, discos and cafees (chyba to jest 'cafes')..
After this journey I woULD like to go.. where civilisation hASN'T reached yet and where there ARE (dlatego ze hordes of tourists to l. mnoga) no hordes of tourists, no telephones and no noisy TV nearby. In such a place I would get awAy from crowds, fuss and all trOUBLES.
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