BŁAGAM o sprawdzenie i dotłumaczenie - opis kraju

Witam. Nie jestem obeznany w angielskim i znam zaledwie podstawy podstaw (bardziej wole niemiecki), a na zadanie mieliśmy opisać jakiś kraj. Ja wybrałem Niemcy i poniżej zamieszczam efekt pracy. Proszę kogoś o sprawdzenie i dotłuamczenie mi kilku zdań, ponieważ nie umię sobie poradzić.

Germany is one of the most popular tourist destinations in the central Europe. The capital of Germany is Berlin. There are 82 5[tel]thousand’s population. The other big cites are Hamburg, Munich, Cologne, Frankfurt am Main an Stuttgart. The cites are very picturesque and full of old buildings, narrow streets and impressive squares full of the lively cafés. This country is in central Europe. It is bordered to the north by the North Sea, Denmark and the Baltic Sea, to the east by Poland and the Czech Republic, to the south by Austria and Switzerland, and to the west by France, Luxembourg, Belgium and the Netherlands. Within its borders are a portion of the Alps, the famous Rhine and Danube rivers, and the Black Forest. It`s capital is Berlin. The Germany currency is Euro.
The German people aren’t very tall. They are also very lively, friendly and sociable. In Germany most people live in cites in big homes and blocks. They work in offices shops and factories. The German love to eat >>kluski, pierogi and kiełbasa

Germany is one of the most popular tourist objective in the centralrnEurope.(...)The other big cites are: Hamburg, Munich,Cologne, Frankfurt am Main an Stuttgart.(...) The towns are very picturesque and full of old buildings, narrow streets and impressive squares full of the lovely cafés. (...)This country is in central Europe .From north is bordered by the North Sea, Denmark and the Baltic Sea,from east by Poland and the Czech Republic.The south is surrounded by Austria and Switzerland.The west is inclosed by France, Luxembourg,rn>Belgium and the Netherlands.Within its borders there are: part ofrnAlps, the famous rivers-Rhine and Danube, and the Black Forest. (It`srncapital is Berlin)- znowu powtorka zdania.German currency is euro.People, who live in that country are not very tall,but they are very lively ,friendly and sociable. Most people live in cities in big houses and flats.The German enjoy eating noodle,and sausages.To drink they prefer beer. German beer is one of the most popular in the world,for example:Becks Pilsener, Frankfurter Pils orrnBerliner Pilsener. Free time they spend in cafés andrnclubs or going out for dinner. Germany is very beautiful if it is going about geographical consideration.German Lowland is cut by the most important rivers of the country: Ren, Ems, Wezera and Łaba which go to Baltic Sea.The highest mount is Zugspitze (2963 m.n.p.m.

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Germany is one of the most popular tourist objective in the central Europe. The capital of Germany is Berlin. There are 82 5[tel]thousand’s population. The other big towns are: Hamburg, Munich, Cologne, Frankfurt am Main, Dresden and Stuttgart. From north is bordered by the North Sea, Denmark and the Baltic Sea, from east by Poland and the Czech Republic. The south is surrounded by Austria and Switzerland. The west is inclosed by France, Luxembourg, Belgium and the Netherlands. Within its borders there are: part of Alps, the famous rivers - Rhine and Danube, and the Black Forest. The Germany currency is Euro.
The German people are middle tall. They are ______ hair, green eyes and SSSSSSSSS. They are also very lively, friendly and sociable. Most people live in cities in big houses and flats. The German enjoy eating noodle, pierogi and sausages. To drink they prefer beer. German beer is one of the most popular in the world, for example: Becks Pilsener, Frankfurter Pils or Berliner Pilsener. Free time they spend in cafés and clubs, running or going out for dinner. The known German people are: Benedict XVI, Angela Merkel, Friedrich Nietzsche, Johann Wolfgang von Goethe and Ludwig van Beethoven.
Germany is very beautiful if it is going about geographical consideration. German Lowland is cut by the most important rivers of the country: Ren, Ems, Wezera and Laba which go to Baltic Sea. The highest mount is Zugspitze. It is 2963 Meter high. Przy granicy ze Szwajcarią leży największe jezioro kraju - Jezioro Bodeńskie, z którego wypływa rzeka Ren, najdłuższa zaś rzeka Europy - Dunaj (część w Niemczech) wypływa z gór Schwarzwald. Lasy pokrywają ok. 30% powierzchni kraju. Są liczne parki narodowe i rezerwaty. Klimat umiarkowany, łagodny, pozostający pod wpływem Oceanu Atlantyckiego, zimy łagodne z częstymi odwilżami, lata ciepłe.
There are many intresting places. In Berlin Brandenburg Gate, Royal Castles Neuschwanstein i Hohenschwangau, Cologne Catedre, Reichstag, Museums Island, Bamberg – światowe dziedzictwo kulturalne UNESCO and palaces and gartens in Potsdam. W Niemczech jest także wiele zabytkowych miejscowości, gdzie znajdują się stare i ładne domy. Znane niemieckie firmy to: Daimler-Chrysler, Siemens, Volkswagen, BMW, BAyer, Bosch and Deutsche Bank.
Germany is a fantastic country to visit. Ciekawe zabytki and passionate people make it a great place for a holiday.


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