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Hello;)chcialabym zeby ktos spojrzal na ten tekst, poprawil bledy i moze dodal jakies sygestie i pomysly:)
Greece is one of with European country. This place is sinated by the seashore Mediterranean. Grecce id next door to Albania, Bulgaria, Turkey and Macedonia. The capital is Athens. In Greece lived about 10.6 mln residents. This is developed country, member of the European Union since 1981. Many people think to Greece and immendiately thin of Olympic Games. In Athens was first the Olympic Games , present take place any 4 years in country over the world. The best place in Greece is Acropolis, wchich stand for place cult. This temle is on lime hill. People in this country listen to song very popular singer Elena Paparizou. She won Eurovision and her songs are recognize in each lcorner. They eat a lot of fish, vegetables and salad. Their favourite addition to dish is oil with dive. Full breakfast isn't popular in Greece, but lunch eat late afternoon. Before go to work, they drink little cup coffe. In this country is very ht, therefore the best drink is cold coffe “Frappe". This drink serve up in high glass, mix in with minereal water in special mixer, offer with bit sugar and milk. Theater is traditional image of Greece. They were building this place for staged interesting play and created job actor. There national sport are water sports, bacause Greece sinated by the seashore Mediterranean, Ionian Sea, Aegean Sea.Favoutites sports are: sailing, water polo and windsurfing. Greece is beautiful and excating places on the world. This country havre rich culture, lovely nature, delicious cuisine and surely is admirable. This is the best place on holiday.

Hello;)chcialabym zeby ktos spojrzal na ten tekst, poprawil bledy i moze dodal jakies sygestie i pomysly:)rnNo zlituje sie bo juz widze to dwa dni i nikomu sie nie chce za to zabrac.rnrnGreece is one of [with] European countrIES. This place is [sinated] LOCATED ON THE COAST OF THE Mediterranean SEA. GreEce [id next door to] BORDERS Albania, Bulgaria, Turkey and Macedonia. The capital is Athens. In Greece [lived] THERE ARE about 10.6 [mln NIE MA TAKIEGO SKROTU W ANG.] MILLION residents. This is A developed country AND A member of the European Union since 1981. Many people think [to] OF Greece and imme[n]diately thinK of Olympic Games. [In Athens was] THE first [the] Olympic Games WERE IN ATHENS AND presentLY THEY take place [any] EVERY 4 years in DIFFERENT countrIES [over] OF the world. The best place TO VISIT in Greece is Acropolis, w[c]hich standS for "A place OF cult". This temPle is on A lime hill. People in this country LOVE listenING to songS OF A very popular singer Elena Paparizou. She won THE Eurovision SONG CONTEST and her songs are [recognizeD in each lcorner] POPULAR ALL OVER EUROPE (THE WORLD??). They eat [WHO? THE SONGS?] GREEK PEOPLE eat a lot of fish, vegetables and saladS. Their favourite addition to dishES is oil with [dive???] LIME [?]. Full breakfast isn't popular in Greece, [but] INSTEAD THEY EAT lunch IN THE afternoon. Before [go to] work, they drink A little cup coffeE. [In] This country is very hOt, therefore the best drink is cold coffeE CALLED “Frappe". This drink IS serveD [up] in A high glass, mixED [in] with miner[e]al water in A special mixer, offerED with A bit OF sugar and milk. THE Theater is A traditional image of Greece. They [were building this place for] stage MANY interesting playS and create[d] A LOT OF jobS FOR actorS. [There] GREEK national sportS are water sports, b[a]Ecause Greece [sinated by the seashore] LIES ALONG THE Mediterranean, Ionian [Sea,]AND Aegean Sea. FavouR[t]ite sports are: sailing, water polo and windsurfing. Greece is ONE OF THE MOST beautiful and exc[a]Iting places [on] IN the world. This country hav[r]e A rich culture, lovely nature, delicious cuisine and [surely ]is VERY admirable. This is the best place [on] FOR A holiday.rnrnPrzed rzeczownikami brakuje rodzajnikow.rnDrinks are mixED, servED, offerED.rnZanim cos wyslesz to przeczytaj i popraw bledy, wtedy dla nas bedzie mniej do poprawiania: sygestie, havre, bacause, thin, wchich, temle, ht. Te wyrazy na pewno wiesz jak pisac. Prosze Cie sprawdz i zapamietaj znaczenie tych dwoch slowek: "sloppy" & "neat".