Takie małe opowiadanko. Jakby ktoś mógł zerknąć, czy to wogóle ma ręce i nogi... I czy nie ma jakichś głupich błędów. Będę baaardzo wdzięczna.
Abdullah and Zahira are young people from India. Few days ago they got married. But how did it all started?
Well, it was about two years ago. They were introduced to each other by their friends. They are both very shy, but when they stayed together, they were talking for ages, as if they were old friends. Abdullah suggested that they could meet once again and then they started meeting in secret. One day Abdullah asked Zahira, if she wanted to be his wife. She obviously said 'yes'. First, Abdullah went to Zahira's father to ask if he could marry his daughter. Then Abdullah's and Zahira's fathers met to set hte date for the wedding. They clinched immediately, so that their children could finally get married.
The ceremony was beautiful. First, Abdullah marked his bride by putting a red spot on her forehead.. Then they made an offering of rice and in the and they had to circle the fire for seven times.
Since then they are wife and husband and they are still attracted to each other.
No, więc czekam na sugestie. Może ktoś ma pomysł jak odrobinę rozwinąć wstęp i zakończenie?