help!!!!! błagam spr:)

witam:)
bardzo proszę o pomoc w sprawdzeniu!
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When I took this photo I was 16.I with my family were at aunt's home.
It was great. I met my further family. We didn't meet often, becouse my aunt, uncel, cousins live in Germany.

The were saying: You must visit us often. There were having great fun. My cousin in the photo was drinking a champagne. When we living a coutry we said: goodbye and see you soon!

bradzo Was proszę o pomoc!
z góry dzięki :*

(poprawiłam tak, jakbyś opisywała zdjęcie, nie wiem czy o to Ci chodziło;p)

When i took this photo i was at my aunt's house with my family. I was 16. It was great. I met my further family.We don't meet often, because my aunt, uncle and cousins live in Germany.
The were saying: You must visit us often. We were having great time. In this photo, my cousin is drinking a champagne. When we was living, we said: goodbye and see you soon!

olka-
ja juz to poprawilam, prosze nie panikowac, i co chwile wklwejac nam ten sam tekst. Jak dostaniesz odpowiedzi na kazdy to i dalej nie bedziesz wiedziala ktory jest poprawnie napisany.
Naprawde, 3 razy to nietrzeba wklejac. Ktos zawsze pomoze.
Zobacz moje poprawki, bo one chociaz nie sa bledne.