Proszę o przetłumaczenie i sprawdzenie poprawek

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Strumming my pain with her fingers
Singing my life with her words
Killing mee softly with her song,
Killing me softly with her songs
Telling my whole life with her words
Killing me softly with her song

I heard she sang a good song
I heard she had a style
And so I came to see her and listen for a while
And there she was, this younger
A stranger to my eyes

I felt all flushed with fever
In there was a vital crowd
I felt she found my letters and read each out loud
Afraid that she would finish
But she just kept right on

She sang as if she knew me in all my dark despair
And then she looked right through me
As if I wasn't there
But she was there stranger
Singing clear and strong



Proszę o sprawdzenie czy wszystko jest poprawniie, ponieważ wniosłam kilka zmian w tekscie oraz przetłumaczenie na jeżyk polski. Dziękuję.

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