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Proszę o sprawdzenie mojego listu. Z góry dziękuje ;-)

I am writing to enquire whether you have a vacancy in your company. I wolud like to apply for the position of a hotel attendant.

You will find, I am a responsible and dynamic person. I work well under pressure and can deal with challening situations easily. I also possess good inter-personal abilities. I know that this work would give me a lot of joy and satisfaction. I could also meet new frieds, develope my language skills and enjoy a different cultural experience. As you will see from my curriculum vitae I am a student of the 4th year of Faculty of Mathematics. During my study I am still developing my english skills, I also had fortnight`s practise. My enclosed curriculum vitae provides more details on my qualification.

I would be grateful if you contact me if there would be any vacancies in yor company. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
witam,
na koniec nie piszemy "i am looking..."(to mało formalne jak na application letter)...wystarzcy"Yours sincerely", a potem tylko podpis
Jeśli chodzi o kwalifikacje.."details OF my...."
w pierwszym akapicie powinieneś zawrzeć info o sobie i o studiach, w drugim dopiero dlaczego własnie Ciebie mają przyjąć-czyli swoje mocne strony i dlaczego chcesz pracować...
pozdrawiam:)
dorota

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