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Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie zamieszczonego tekstu, który jest mi potrzebny do szkoły. Proszę o wskazanie i poprawienie wszlekich błędów. Z góry dziękuję.
The ,,Dreamcatcher" Movie is based on one of Stephen King`s book. Many people waited for Dreamcatcher`s premiere. Finally producents published that Dreamcatcher will be released only at DVD and Videos. Stephen King`s Fans were a little bit dissapointed of movie level.
The story begins in small town in Maine county. Man who is called Beaver remebered his childhood and his three best friends. They aren`t normal people. When They were young,they heard boy`s crying. Four friends followed for screaming. They reached to old office yard. There were three older boys from school baseball team. They were abusing to one handicapped boy. Four Friends - Beaver , Pete , Jonesy and Henry helped boy. His name was Duddits. Since this moment boys got through with Duddits by super natural power. Few years later, four friends meet at hunting but there is something wrong. Animals run away and die. Frieends meet man who claims that he crossed forest (about 70 miles) during one night. He seems to be very strange. Some of friends die but they who are still alive,regret of it.
As spur to watch ,,Dreamcatcher" can be cast. We can see Morgan Freeman as Colonel Abraham Curtis, Thomas Jane as Henry , Jason Lee as Beaver, Damian Lewis as Jonesy, Timothy Olyphant and Donnie Wahlberg as Duddits . It can impress but acting doesn`t seem to be so good. As longer as I watched ,,Dreamcatcher" I had impression that director along with lapse of time had less and less ideas to cotinue his work. In movie we can't see much blood although this is horror. "Dreamcatcher" has two or three scary scenes. On advantage of the movie also influences disagreement scenario with book's plot. Director skiped many important scenes fromm book. Also ending is different than this one in book. Someone who wants to taste blood should at first read Dremcatcher then watch a movie, because other order may only destroy pleasure of exploring thriller's content.
zerknęłam tylko na część wypracowania. Oto wyniki:

on one of the S.King's books (tutaj zabrakło "s")
that Dreamcatcher would be
in a small town (article "a")
reached an old....(bez "to")
abusing the handicapped (bez "to")
helped the boy
A few years later (To co napisałeś "Few years later" znaczy "Niewiele lat później" Kiedy dodasz "a" przed tym wyrażeniem otrzymasz zdanie "Kilka lat później". Nie wiem jaki był kontekst dlatego wybierz sam prawidłową opcję)
friend meet a man
he crossed the forest
but those who are still alive, regret it

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