Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy- najdziwniejszy dzień w moim życiu

Dostałam do napisania krótką pracę w czasie przeszłym.Temat- "najdziwniejszy dzień w moim życiu" Z angielskim jest u mnie bardzo przeciętnie i wolę nie oddawać pracy bez sprawdzenia. Byłabym bardzo wdzięczna, gdyby ktoś wyłapał błędy.Z góry dziękuje.


Over two years ago I babysitting 9 month old daughter of my friends, who had night-shift that day. It wasn't the first time when I look after the Maja, so I knew the whole routine. We went for a walk in the city park, a little longer than usual. After that, we got back to the home and we had a dinner and I gave her a bath. Maja was so tired that she was asleep in my lap, so I decided it was time to go put her down to sleep for the night. I went to put her in her bedroom, and I thought it was pretty strange that her night lamp on the wall was on, so I turned it off, layed her down, and went to go watch TV. Around 9:30 I heard that Maja crying. I figured she was just being fussy and I went to go see what was up, and once again the light was on. I thought maybe it had something to do with the outlet so I moved it to another one. After that I went back to watch TV and around 11 she started to cry again.So once again I went in there, and the light was turned on again. I was honestly scared and I decided to took her out of this room and sat down with her. I was too scared to get back to her room and move her crib to the living room, so I put her down to sleep on the couch and watched her all night.
I know It is possible that there are real explainations to what happened that night, but for me It was one of creepiest and disturbing moment in my life.

Over two years ago I 'babysitting' (tutsaj potrzebujesz czasownika a nie rzecz) (brak przedimka) 9 month old daughter of (napisz one of) my friends, who had night-shift that day. It wasn't the first time 'when' (zle slowo, tutaj THAT I 'look' (zly czas tutaj simple past) after 'the' (niepotr) Maja, so I knew the whole routine.
After that, we got back 'to the' (niepotr) home and we had 'a' (niepotr) dinner and I gave her a bath. Maja was so tired that she was asleep in my lap, so I decided it was time to go AND put her down to sleep for the night. I went to put her in her bedroom, and I thought it was pretty strange that her night lamp on the wall was on, so I turned it off, 'layed' (ortog) her down, and went to go AND watch TV. Around 9:30 (am? czy pm?) I heard that Maja WAS crying. I figured THAT she was just being fussy and I went to go AND see what was up, and once again the light was on.
After that I went back to watch TV and around 11 (pm) she started to cry again.
I was honestly scared and I decided to 'took' (czas teraz) her out of this room and 'sat' SIT down with her.
I know THAT it is possible that there are real explainations AS to what happened that night, but for me it was one of creepiest and disturbing momentS in my life.