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I don't believe horoscopes. I was born on the 20 of April, so I am Aries. In my horoscopes is written, Aries are well organized, they with very good people skills and they need to learn a bit more patience. I think, I am well organized and I have with very good people skills. But I think, I am patient and I don't need to learn a bit more patience. There is also written that when the Aries stop thinking about themselves, they are excellent managers. I think, I not think about myself, I think about other people and if I just want, I can to be an excellent managers. In the future I want to be a teacher. These skills and traits will be useful to me. The teacher should to be well organizes, patient and an excellent managers. The good teacher should stop thinking about themselves, he should think about students. I know that I have his skills and I will be a good teacher.

I don't believe (tu cos brakuje) (Czy nigdy nie slyszales..I believe in Father Christmas?) horoscopes. I was born on the 20TH of April, so I am (brak przedimka) Aries. In my horoscopes IT is written THAT Aries are well organized, 'they with very good' (nie rozumiem co to znaczy) people skills and they need to learn a bit more patience. I think THAT (dlaczego nie uzywasz 'that'?) I am well organized and I have 'with very' (nie rozumiem co to ma byc) good people skills. But I think THAT I am patient and I don't need to learn 'a bit more' ANYMORE patience. 'There' IT is also written that when the Aries stop thinking about themselves, they are excellent managers. I think THAT , I 'not' (brakuje slowa przed 'not') think about myself, I think about other people and if I 'just' (niepotr) want, I 'can to be' (tego nie rozumiem) an excellent 'managers' (l. poj bo przeciez mowisz o sobie - ratunku, ludzie, cos raz na kiedy myslcie- jak l. poj to l. poj).
'The' (zly przedimek) teacher should to be well 'organizes' (popraw), patient and an excellent 'managers' (dlaczego do chjasnej, piszesz 'teacher'-l. poj a pozniej piszesz 'managers-l. mn. Co to jest?) . 'The' A good teacher should stop thinking about themselves, he should think about students. I know that I have 'his' THESE skills and I will be a good teacher.