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Today I’d like to compare living In a town with living in a country. Fresh and clean air? Long walking on moon light? Or traffic jam and dangerous street ? What do you choose?
Firstly silence calm. Everyone prizes onself private life. People like when coming home and can rest in calm and silence.
Secondly, better earnings. The man on the street earnings more than person , who live and work on the ferm.
To sum up. Living in a town and living in a country have advantages and disadvantages and we must choose what is better for us.
Today I'd like to compare living In a town with living in 'a' THE country.
Long 'walking' (zla czesc mowy) 'on' (zle slowo) (brak przedimka) moon light? Or traffic jam and dangerous streetS ? 'What' WHICH ONE WOULD 'do' (niepotr) you choose?
Firstly silence AND calm. Everyone prizes 'onself' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo - tutaj ONES private life. People like 'when coming home and can rest' (to jest niezreczne, popatrz na to i popraw) in calm and silence.
The man 'on' IN the street 'earnings' (zla czesc mowy) more than (brak przedimka) person , who 'live' (3os l poj) and 'work' (3os.l.poj) on the 'ferm' (ortog).