Rozprawka -imprezy sportowe

Polecenie: Wiele krajów ubiega się o organizowanie ważnych, międzynarodowych imprez sportowych. Napisz rozprawkę przedstawiającą dobre i złe strony organizacji takich imprez dla danego kraju lub miasta.

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie i uwagi ;)

One of the widest known sport events is the Europe Championship. Many countries are applying for privilege to organise it. In 2012 it will belong to Poland and Ukraine.

This is a great responsibility. Arranging the championship brings a lot of difficulties. The country which is a host, have to invest so much money to build a stadions and improve infrastructure. It's very hard to execute it in a fixed time.

On the other hand, the host-country can achieve high revenues. FIFA gives a huge donations which can be used for highway-building and development. What's more it is also a possibility to progressing touristic industrie and show the world a national culture.

Taking everything into account I think that organising international sport events is a very hard venture, but it brings a serious benefits.

One of the widest known sport events is the Europe Championship. Many countries are applying for privilege to organise it. In 2012 it will belong to Poland and Ukraine.

This is a BIG responsibility. Arranging the championship brings a lot of difficulties. The country which is a ORGANIZER, have to invest so much money to build a stadions and improve infrastructure. It's very hard to execute it in a fixed time.

On the other hand, the PROMOTER-country can achieve high revenues. FIFA gives a huge donations which can be used for BUILDING THE HIGHWAYS and development. What's more it is also a possibility to progressing touristic industrie and show the world a national culture.

Taking everything into account I think that organising international sport events is a very hard venture, but it brings a serious benefits.

Dobry tekst ale parę poprawek wprowadziłem :D

Bardzo dziękuję, spodziewałam się że będzie dużo więcej błędów ;) Czy merytorycznie ten tekst jest poprawny i czy przeszedł by na rozszerzonej maturze?

Dalej błędy są: użycie articles (przed l. mnogą nie stawiamy a)

w 3. osoby l. pojedynczej czasu teraźniejszego używamy has nie have.

Aha, czyli ma być np. "build stadions" zamiast "build a stadions" ; "country (...) has to invest", zamiast "have to invest"

build stadions
country...has to ....

dziękuję za pomoc ;)

stadions? na pewno?

powinno być stadiums? playing fields?

stadiums?
jak piszesz po angielsku to chyba tak

to build

i nie Europe a EUROPEAN

One of the widest known sport events is the 'Europe' (popraw) Championship. Many countries are applying for (brak tu czegos - dlaczego nikt tego nie zauwaza???) privilege to organise it.

The country which is 'a' (zly przedimek) ORGANIZER, 'have' (od kiedy? tutaj ma byc czasownik 3os.l.poj a jest czy co?) to invest so much money to build 'a' (nie stawiamy przedimkow przed l. mnoga - to jest podstawowe-) 'stadions' (ortog) and improve (brak cos tutaj) infrastructure.

What's more 'it' (zle slowo, tutaj THERE is also a possibility to progressing 'touristic' (ortog) 'industrie' (ortog ) and 'show' (zle slowo) the world 'a' (nie jakies tam 'a', bo z tego co wiem Polska ma 'THE') national culture.

Taking everything into account I think that organising international sport events is a very hard venture, but it brings 'a' (po co to?) 'serious' (zle slowo) benefits.

One of the widest known sport events is the European Championship. Many countries are applying for a privilege to organise it. In 2012 it will belong to Poland and Ukraine.

This is a big responsibility. Arranging the championship brings a lot of difficulties. The country which is an organizer, has to invest so much money to build stadiums and improve an infrastructure. It's very hard to execute it in a fixed time.

On the other hand, the promoter-country can achieve high revenues. FIFA gives a huge donations which can be used to build the highways and development. What's more there is also a possibility to progressing tourist industry and show the world the national culture.

Taking everything into account I think that organising international sport events is a very hard venture, but it brings meaningful benefits.

mam nadzieję że teraz już jest dobrze, tylko nie wiem czym zastąpić to niewłaściwe 'show'

albo 'showing' albo 'to show'

tylko nawiasem:
The country which is an organizer, ... = The host country, ...