sprawdziłby mi to ktoś? wady i zalety telewizji

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
In my opinion television is the most important for currently people. I think television has defects and advantage.
In my opinion television is good because we can find out with message what happened in the world. We can a lot of learn with scientific and nature programs who TV show ours. We need a simple way to relax in the evenings. Next advantages is supply informations about current events. TV organised many charitable action helping people in the world.
The first defects television are too long commercial and good movies are often too late. During watch TV families spend less time talking to each other. I think that TV has bad influence on children, youth and adults, because they can happened addicted to watching TV all the time.
After much defects I think that television is good invention for people. Only we should chose good programs who watch.
Cytat: justyna030303
In my opinion television is the most important for 'currently' (zla czesc mowy) people. I think (a gdzie jest THAT) (nie, tutaj cos brakuje. TV to jest mebel, a tutaj chodzi o 'ogladanie telewizji) television has defects and advantage.
In my opinion television is good because we can find out 'with message' (tego nie rozumiem) what happened in the world. We can 'a lot of learn' (co?) with scientific and nature programs 'who TV show ours' (ladnie, ale niegram).
Next 'advantages is' (dlaczego mieszasz l. mn z l. poj?) supply 'informations' (zle) about current events. 'TV' (nie mysle, ze akurat TV, wiecej slawni ludzie ktorzy wystepuja w TV) organised many charitable action helping people in the world.
The first defects (brak slowa) television 'are too long commercial' (znowu mieszasz l. poj z mnoga) and good movies are often too late (dla kogo? Nie dla ludzi ktorzy pracuja na nocke). 'During watch' (zle) TV families spend less time talking to each other. I think that TV has bad influence on children, youth and adults, because 'they can happened addicted to watching TV all the time' (to nie jest gram).
After much defects I think that television is (przedimek) good invention for people. Only we should chose good 'programs' (ortog) 'who' (zle slowo) watch.

Prosze nie uzywaj translatorow, jak nie znasz slow, to pisz uzywajac takie ktore znasz. I naucz sie w jaki sposob tworzy sie zdania w jez. ang.
a mogł byś mi to jakoś tak poprawić, żeby było w miarę dobrze? Bo ja to zrobię, ale pewnie też będzie niekoniecznie dobrze, a muszę się tego na jutro nauczyć

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