Pomyślałam o wakacjach:)

Dzień dobry mam na zadanie napisać opis czegoś co działo się kiedyś, pomyślałam o wakacjach, używając 12 regularnych i 12 nieregularnych czasowników. Oto co stworzyłam. Proszę o skradzenie:) ewentualnie jakieś rady :)

I spent my last holiday in the Warsaw. I went there with my friends Ula i Paulina. We got to Palace of colture. We lived at a big high-rise very near the centre of Warsaw, and spent as time on the field looking at the beauty tenement house. We getting up early in the morning and going driving carriage( chodziło o taką z końmi) . We usually came back late - generally around 7PM, and then had dinner. In the evening we went to discos, karaoke, or played cards. In warsaw is a lot of fun. on the streets of Warsaw is a lot of foreigners, so often talked in English. I saw the Warsaw Uprising Museum, where he saw a huge plane in one of the hall, this day I remember best. We had a beautiful room in the hotel. often sat on the balcony. sunbathe and we ate ice cream. We went around the shops looking at beautiful dresses. Warsaw is a beautiful place.


Może ktoś to sprawdzić ? napisać czy mam wystarczająco czasowników :)

I spent my last holiday in the Warsaw. I went there with my friends Ula and Paulina. We got to Palace of colture. We lived at a big high-rise close to the centre of Warsaw, and spent the time on the field. We looked at the beauty tenement house. We got up early in the morning and we rode a horse chaise . We usually came back late - generally around 7PM, and then we had dinner. In the evening we went to disco, karaoke, or played cards. There is a lot of fun in Warsaw. on the streets of Warsaw is a lot of foreigners, so we often talked in English. I saw the Warsaw's Uprising Museum, where is a huge plane in one of the hall, this day I remember best. We had a beautiful room in the hotel. we often sat on the balcony and sunbathed and we ate ice cream. We went around the shops looking at beautiful dresses. Warsaw is a beautiful place. -- jest ok ?

proszę was bardzo o poprawienie tego tekstu;/ na jutro potrzebuję sie tego nauczyć na pamiec a nie bede sie uczyła czegoś co jest źle...

I spent my last holiday in 'the' (niepotr) Warsaw.
We got to (brak przedimka) Palace of 'colture' (ortog i duza litera). We lived 'at' IN a big high-rise close to the centre of Warsaw, and spent 'the time on the field' (tego nie rozumiem). We looked at the beauty OF THE tenement house.
In the evening we went to (brak przedimka) disco, karaoke, or played cards. There is a lot of fun in Warsaw. on the streets of Warsaw THERE is a lot of foreigners, so we often talked in English. I saw the Warsaw's Uprising Museum, where THERE is a huge plane in one of the hallS, this day I remember (brak przedimka) best.
reszta ok

I saw the Warsaw's Uprising Museum, where .../po co apostrof S w tym zdaniu?/

dzięki terri :) a jest tam wymagana liczba czasowników ? bo ja nie potrafię tego odróżnić :(

fui eu- a w sumie nie wiem...

Ja bym nie dal. Poza tym bym poprawil cos w tym urywku zdania: ...THERE is a lot of foreigners, so ...

http://www.inyourpocket.com/poland/warsaw/sightseeing/warsawuprising/Warsaw-Uprising-Museum_19872v

A w ostatnim zdaniu, mowi sie "..., this day I remember (brak przedimka) best." /najlepiej czy najwiecej?/