I was supposed to write an article which as far as I know is a part of the CAE writing.
I would be grateful if people who are knowledgeable about how to write an article would respone to my thread as I would like to know whether the structure used in the article is correct or not.
Tourism - is it good or bad for your region?
Do you think there should be lees or more tourism in your region.
What benefits does the tourist industry bring to your region?
What would be the disadvantages of increased tourism?
Tourism- if properly used, it can turn a poor village into a land of opportunities.
Regions that swarm with tourists are usually very prosperous. However, there is a general disagreement among dwellers, which derives from the fact that serious and recurrent problems are also typical of tourist resorts.
My region has never been considered a tourist destination but I think if the local council were to change its policy, the situation would improve substantially. In my neighborhood, there are fine lakes that ought to be converted into wonderful places with sand and cafes. It would lead to local residents earning more and more money. On the other hand, tourists can be a real nuisance, especially rowdy individuals who take no notice of other people drinking or throwing rubbish everywhere.
Agrotouristics is also what my region may offer. Establishing such properties would be beneficial for local industry leading to its boost and lower unemployment. Nevertheless, some people might argue it could ruin the naturalness of such land.166
Having taken a rest at a lake visitors can take a look at my area’s history monuments. The increase in their popularity is vital if they are to survive as their supervisors need money to cover the costs of maintenance. But it is worth bearing in mind that any misuse of these valuables may be disastrous because of their fragility.
To sum up , I find the improvement of my area’s attractions crucial if it wants to switch smoothly from out-of-date and costly industry like mining to new, a bit more desirable branches such as tourism.
edytowany przez flomounier: 09 lut 2012