Witam!
Uczę się angielskiego od 4 miesięcy i jestem na bardzo niskim poziomie. w związku z tym proszę was o pomoc. To miała być praca na temat czy " sending criminals who are not dangerous to prison".
In Poland we have a lot of prisoner then other country in Europe. In EU we have 6[tel]prisones in this 90 000 in Poland. ( chciałam powiedzieć, że w UK mamy 6[tel]więźniów w tym 90 000 w Polsce). Someone can think that we have high criminality.
On of rison this situation is a law. When someone commit a crime he find oneself in prison when he waiting for jugement. ( Chcę powiedzieć, że jeśli ktos popełni przestępstwo czeka na wyrok już w areszcie). If a human is very dangerous for environment it is good solution. But sometimes people spend a lot of time in cell and on the end they will acquit. We can ask that sending criminals who are not dangeous to prison is it good answer?
Firstly people which spend time i prisons can't work and earn money. For his maintain have to pay a state so you and I.( Chce powiedzieć ,że za ichutrzyanie musi płacić panstwo czyli ty i ja.) Cost on living during one month is some about 2500zł. In comparison to pensioners who get 700 zl it is a lot of. ( Chciałam powiedzieć, że w porównaniu z emerytami ktorzy dostają 700 zl to dużo).
The main disadventage of ths problem is a change behavior in prisons. Often people who find oneself in cell for thef or other not very serious crime, they mit a lot of dangeous people. When they leave a cell they commit more serious crime and come back to prison.
On theother hand, often a judge have problem with evaluate ( ocenić) who is dangeous human and who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. I think a good solution is use psychologist who can hel determine whch a prisoners is dangerous for other people.
To sum up, it is vey dificult thing. Maybe we shuld make a special closed centre whee not dangerous prisoners can work and earn for cast on living. They shuld have contact with outdoor becouse it will be hepful durng coming back to normal life on freedom. Perhaps we need restrictivless law. I hope that we finde good solution.
Wiem, że sprawdzanie tego to będzie ciężka praca ale z góry dziękuję za każdą pomoc.