Host Family Letter - prosze o sprawdzenie...WAŻNE!!!

Dear Host Family,

At the beggining of my letter I would like to thank you very much for thinking about choosing me to be a part of your family for one year. First of all I would like to introduce me. My name is Katarzyna Hyla. I am twenty years old and I live in a small village called Jaskowice, thats about 40 kilometres of Kraków. I go to the high school, hotel management techniques. I live with my parents and my siblings in our own house with beautiful garden. My family and I love spending time there in the warm summer evenings and talk to a barbecue.

My parents run their own business. They import goods from Italy, where I love to ride with dad. I like Italian life and the climate there. My parents have a really big influence on me and their opinion is very important for me.
I have three siblings and we all live together. Paula is the oldest at 26. She lives with her husband and my nephew,Antoni with us. They are going to move out to their new house next month. My brother, Lukasz is 24 and and currently is in France, at work. And finally, there is my younger sister, Aleksandra (Ola). She is 13 and she has really a big plans for the future. I have a good relationship to her. She is lively and talks much. She also can cheer me up when I am sad. Although she is already taller than me I call her my "little". Sometimes we have arguments, too, but if not we would not be siblings. I love my siblings so much and I am glad that I am not an only child.

Two years ago, in the summer I was one month on English course in Malta from Education First (EF) and from their website I found out about Au Pair programme. Gradually I took more interest in that topic. Sometime I talked to my parents about it and they thought that this is a good idea. I wrote a lot of forum about being Au Pair. I would like to come to the USA because this land combines more than one positive aspect. Nowadays, English is a world-language and it is important to speak it very well. But I am also interested in your culture and your habits. It must be great to meet the family at Thanks Giving or to go to costume-parties at Halloween.

Many of the free time I spend with my friends or my family. It depends. Usually we meet each other after school such as going to the cinema, having a picnic in the park or doing more active things like running, roller skating and riding a bike. I am sociable person. I always say my opinion and do not talk what others want. I also stand up for other people if I think that their treatment is not fair. I certainly have many friends because I have no prejudices and I am open hearted.

The education is very important for me. I would like to be a flight attendant in the future. It was always my dreams. I know that it is difficult to get this job, especially in good AirLines but I like new challenges. I love travelling and meeting new people. I want to discover a new cultural and amazing places. I am responsible, communicative, friendly, open person with a positive attitude towards people and full of energy. I think that these features are very important in this work. Work as flight attendants treat as the realization of dreams and challenging. I would like to study tourism in the USA.

Since I can remember surrounds myself with children and people of my age or older also. On the world is so many people who want to be an au pair to know American culture, learn the language and have a good time with children. I am one of them. I think I'm the person you can rely on.I love spending time with children because looking at their smiling faces makes my every day becomes more colorful. I like to listen to their funny stories and their "big" problems. I would like to be like older sister for them and help them with their homework. I have gained experience with working children. I spend a lot of time with my nephew, Antoni. Also I looked after children in the summer. I had to pick up from school, feed them and we organized a lot of diffrent plays together. In April I am going to go on course about painting faces and other things.

Being Au Pair is not only a chance to improve my english and know a new cultural but a chance to become apart of other peoples life. I think that being an au pair really shapes us. Au pair is not only fun, duties associated with them but also I as a young teenager, I can learn responsibility, respect the other person and I think it is thanks to the children of our life becomes more colorful and they show us what is really important in life.

I hope this letter gave you an interesting insight into my life and I am looking forward to my year with you in the United States!

With best regards,
Katarzyna

mam nadzieję, że to nie jest zadanie maturalne. Dużo za dużo.
Rzuciłam okiem na początek i w pierwszej linijce literówka. Z tą szkoła coś dziwnego wyszło (jaka to szkoła?), po like czasownik continuous (chodzi o 'talk') no i napisałaś że lubisz rozmawiać z grillem.

nie nie to jest mój list do Host Family do USA:) chodziło mi o szkołe :technikum hotelarskie. a z tym grillem to chodzilo mi ze spedzamy duzo czasu w ogrodzie rozmawiajac przy grillu. :)

At the 'beggining' (ortog) of my letter I would like to thank you very much for thinking about choosing me to be a part of your family for one year. First of all I would like to introduce 'me.' (zle slowo)
I am twenty years old and I live in a small village called Jaskowice, thats about 40 kilometres OUT of Kraków.
...I go to the high school, hotel management techniques....(tego nawet nie rozumiem)
I live with my parents and my siblings in our own house with (przedimek) beautiful garden. My family and I love spending time there in the warm summer evenings and talkING 'to' ROUND a barbecue.

They import goods from Italy, where I 'love to ride with dad' (tego nie rozumiem).
My brother, Lukasz is 24 'and and' (jedno wystarczy) IS currently 'is' (niepotr) in France, 'at work' WORKING.
She is 13 and she 'has really a big plans' (zla kol slow) for the future. I have a good relationship 'to' WITH her. She is lively and talks TOO much.
Although she is already taller than me I call her my "little"( tutaj brakuje rzeczownika) . Sometimes we have arguments, too, but if WE DID not we would not be siblings.

Two years ago, in the summer I 'was' SPENT one month on (przedimek) English course in Malta from Education First (EF) and from their website I found out about (przedimek) Au Pair programme.
SometimeS I talked to my parents about it and they thought that this 'is' WAS a good idea.
...I wrote a lot of forum about being Au Pair. ....(tego zdania niepotrzeba tutaj)
It must be great to meet the family at 'Thanks Giving' (to jest jedno slowo) or to go to costume-parties at Halloween.

'Many' MUCH of the free time I spend with my friends or my family. It ALL depends. Usually we meet each other after school AND SPEND OUR TIME ON THINGS such as going to the cinema, having a picnic in the park or doing more active things like running, roller skating and riding a bike. I am (przedimek) sociable person. I always 'say' VOICE my opinion and do not 'talk' SAY what others want.

It was always my dreaM.
I want to discover 'a' (niepotr) new cultural and amazing places. I am responsible, communicative, friendly, open person with a positive attitude towards people and I AM full of energy.
'Work as flight attendants treat as the realization of dreams and challenging' (to zdanie jest zle napisane - zmien kolejnosc slow).

Since I can remember 'surrounds' I AHAVE SURROUNDED myself with children and people of my age or older. 'also' (niepotr). 'On' IN the world THERE ARE 'is' (niepopr bo to musi sie zgadzac z people) so many people who want to be an au pair to know American culture, learn the language and have a good time with children.
I think THAT I'm the person you can rely on.I love spending time with children because looking at their smiling faces makes my every day 'becomes' (niepotr) more colorful.
I have gained experience 'with' OF working WITH children.
I had to pick up from school, feed them and we organized a lot of diffrent 'plays' GAMES together.

Being (przedimek) Au Pair is not only a chance to improve my English (duza litera) and GET TO know a new culturE but a chance to become a part of other peoples 'life' (tutaj l. mn LIVES). I think that being an au pair really 'shapes' FORMS us. BEING AN au pair is not only fun, THERE ARE duties associated with 'them' THIS but also I as a young teenager, I can learn responsibility, respect the other person and I think THAT it is thanks to the children THAT 'of' (niepotr) our life becomes more colorful and they show us what is really important in life.

mysle, ze chodzi tutaj o fraze Technical School, major: hospitality services. Mieszkalam w USA przez wiele lat i nie uzywa sie tam sformulowania technikum hotelarskie. High school to szkola srednia.