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I went to the cinema, if you can feed my dog .His food it's next door .I'll be back in the evening.
XYZ

To o nakarmieniu psa, po kropce. Nie bedzie IT'S w nastepnym zdaniu. Dodaj POZNIEJ w ostatnim zdaniu. /chyba ze poszlas do kina rano/

I went to the cinema, if you can feed my dog . to zdanie tez brzmi dziwnie, jak dla mnie
ja napisałbym:
I went to the cinema. Could you feed my dog?

mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić zaproszenie
Invitation
I, John Doe, together with my parents, we have the honor, to invite Mr of the grand opening of restaurants in the street in such and such Koszalin 25 April 2010 year at the time of 17:00. His presence also honoring us friends, and some members of the family. Provided a wonderful attractions, including fireworks.
You are welcome
Kowalski family

I, John Doe, together with my parents, 'we' (po co to?) have the honor, to invite Mr X 'of' (nie rozumiem tego) (tu cos brak) the grand opening of 'restaurants' (a ile ich bedzie otwierane, wiecej jak jedna?) in 'the' (niepotr) street 'in such and such' (tego nie rozumime) Koszalin (tu brak 2 slowa) 25 April 2010 'year' (niepotr, samo 2010 daje Ci znak, ze to jest rok) at 'the time of' (niepotr) 17:00.
His presence also 'honoring us friends' (co?) , and some members of the family. (tu brak poczatku zdania) provided 'a' (z l. mnoga?) wonderful attractions, including fireworks.