Moje wymarzone wakacje - pomoc w sprawdzeniu.

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Byłabym bardzo wdzięczna za sprawdzenie tych kilku zdań o wakacjach. Z góry bardzo dziękuję!
My dream holidays are a bit strange. When everybody wants to go to places, where temperature is high, i want to do it different. On my dream holidays i want to go to ukraine. Somebody could ask me, why ukraine ? The answer is complicated. In ukraine is a town called chernobyl. Everybody know what happened in chernobyl. There were a big bang in atomic power station. This place around chernobyl is really strange! There are anomalies like a cat who have 2 head. I like that kind of stuff, and that is fascinating me. This trip is not expensive. I think, that all costs will be around $300. In my country that is like a half of month payoffs. But this trip stays only in my mind for now, because my parents don't allow me to go there.
When everybody wants to go to places, where (cos brak) temperature is high, 'i' (popraw, i NIGDY wiecej nie pisz tego mala litera, bo I'll come down on you like a ton of bricks) want to do it differentLY. 'On' (zle slowo) my dream holidays 'i' (popraw) want to go to 'ukraine' (czy nie wiesz, ze nazwy wlasne piszemy duza litera?). Somebody could ask me, why 'ukraine ' (popraw)?
In 'ukraine' (popraw) THERE is a town called 'chernobyl' (popraw, to jest nazwa wlasna). 'Everybody' (nie mozesz pisac 'everybody' bo sa ludzie ktorzy tego nie wiedza) knowS what happened in 'chernobyl' (popraw). There 'were' (tutaj WAS) a big bang in (cos brak) atomic power station. This place around 'chernobyl' (popraw) is really strange! There are anomalies like a cat who 'have' HAS) 2 'head' (dlaczego piszesz 'head' w l. poj, jak masz '2'?). I like that kind of stuff, and that is fascinating (tu brakuje slowa 'dla mnie') me.
I think, that all (dodaj 'the') costs will be around $300. In my country that is like 'a' (niepotr) half of month 'payoffs' (to jest zle slowo, tutaj 'salary').
Ja bym zmienil "when" w drugim zdaniu na inne slowo.
Cytat:
i NIGDY wiecej nie pisz tego mala litera, bo I'll come down on you like a ton of bricks

A nice dose of motivation.
Cytat: fui_eu
Cytat:
i NIGDY wiecej nie pisz tego mala litera, bo I'll come down on you like a ton of bricks

A nice dose of motivation.

I tried the carrot before...