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I have a lot of bad habits. I'm sleepyhead and it's disturb me very much because very often I'm late to my school and teachers are angry to me. I'm very often don't forget where I leave car keys it means that I'm forgetful. But the most disturb me that I can't be patient I want to do everything very fast and very often it's finishing fail. Sometimes I'm lazy and I can't be bothered for learning.

i jeszcze pytanko czy dobrze to przetłumaczyłem?
1) obawiam się że moge być najsłabszym zawodnikiem na tych zawodach
I'm afraid that I can be weakest player on the competition
I'm (dalabym tutaj cos) sleepyhead and 'it's' (tutaj masz 'it is'- gdybys pisal w calosci zauwazylbys blad) 'disturb' (popaw 3os.l.poj) me very much because very often I'm late 'to' (zle slowo) my school and teachers are angry 'to' (zle slowo) me. 'I'm' (to jest 'I am very often' sam zauwazysz ze to jest blad) very often 'don't' (niepotr) forget where I leave (tu cos brak) car keys AND it means that I'm forgetful. But 'the' (daj tutaj WHAT) most 'disturb' (3os.l.poj) me IS that I can't be patient - I want to do everything very fast and very often 'it's finishing fail' (zrob to inaczej). Sometimes I'm lazy and I can't be bothered 'for' (niepotr) learning.

1) obawiam się że moge być najsłabszym zawodnikiem na tych zawodach
I'm afraid that I 'can' MAY be weakest player 'on' IN the competition
I'm A sleepyhead and it DISTURBS me very much because very often I'm late FOR my school and teachers are CHAFE AT me.Very often I dont forget where I leave MY car keys AND it means that I'm forgetful. But WHAT most DISTURBS me IS that I can't be patient - I want to do everything very fast and very often it's END BADLY. Sometimes I'm lazy and I can't be bothered learning.

1) obawiam się że moge być najsłabszym zawodnikiem na tych zawodach
I'm afraid that I MAY be weakest player IN the competition

Dzięki za wskazówki.. czy teraz jest już ok?
Poleciła byś mi jakieś materiały żebym unikał błędów ? Robie gramatyke Murphiego i dużo transformacji a cały czas robie błędy... ;/
?????? Jest ok teraz???????

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