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1) If I could change myself I would change some things in my appearance and some things in character. I wish I was a little bit taller I wish I was 190cm currently I'm 180. I would change my body building I have a problem with my shoulders and I wish I had strongest bones. When it comes about my character I would change some things I wish I could be more patient. I have not the foggiest idea what else I would change I'm glad of my personality.

2)In my country football is very popular a lot of people like watching football matches.
But our football team is very weak and despite of it they have many supporters and the stadium is always full.
If the aren't doing as well as I'd like to I'll insult them. But when match is for example at 10 p.m we don't have break in a company. I know that for example in Argentina people have break even if they are working.
about my appearance... about my character
body build potem kropka, prawda?
strongest = najsilniejsze
comes to
brakuje kilku kropek miedzy zdaniami
as I'd like them to
a match
pracujecie o 10 wieczorem?
a company = w jakiejs firmie
a break
dzięki :) !