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Following feast of all saints which we celebrate in Poland on 1st November I caught up with my thoughts about the family. I noticed how many memory escapes with dead relatives. I decided to create family book and collect all memories of my beloved grandmother Mary. Our family history is long, complicated but interesting. If we do not take care of transfer it to our younger siblings , children, grandchildren – our family tree will die. I hope that you will find some time to complete their part which I do not know too well. I left some space for pictures and envelopes for few sentences about people who belong to our family. So that in 2150 and later – there will be still somebody who will know that at this earth there were in the past a few great ancestors.
African saying :
"When an elder dies, it is as if an entire library has burned to the ground."

With lots of love in this special time which is Christmass
Following (a gdzie jest przedimek?) Feast of all Saints (nazwy WLASNE piszemy duzymi literami)which we celebrate in Poland on (cos brak) 1st November I caught up with my thoughts about the family. I noticed how many 'memory' (tutaj musi byc l. mn, bo przeciez masz slowo 'many' co daje mi znac, ze jest wiecej jak 1) 'escapes' (dostosuj do rzecz.) with dead relatives. I decided to create (cos brak) family book and collect all memories of my beloved grandmother Mary.
If we do not take care 'of transfer it' (lepiej 'of passing it down') to our younger siblings , children, grandchildren – our family tree will die. I hope that you will find some time to complete 'their' (tutaj nie rozumiem do czego to 'their' sie odnosi) part which I do not know too well. I left some space for pictures and envelopes for (cos brak) few sentences about people who belong to our family. So that in 2150 and later – there will 'be still' (tutaj 'still be', bo 'be still' to znaczy 'nie ruszaj sie') somebody who will know that 'at' ON this earth there were in the past a few great ancestors.
(napisz to lepiej...There is an) African saying :
"When an elder dies, it is as if an entire library has burned to the ground."
With lots of love 'in' AT this special time which is 'Christmass' (Christmas)
Dzięki wielkie za pomoc ! :) postaralam sie poprawić błędy jednak w tym przedostatnimzdaniu nie mam pojecia jak moge to napisac ... prosze o pomoc

Following to Feast of all Saints which we celebrate in Poland on the 1st November I caught up with my thoughts about the family. I noticed how many memories runs away with dead relatives. I decided to create the family book and collect all memories of my beloved grandmother Mary.
If we do not take care of passing it down to our younger siblings , children, grandchildren – our family tree will die. I hope that you will find some time to complete parts which I do not know too well. I left some space for pictures and envelopes for a few sentences about people who belong to our family. So that in 2150 and later – there will still be somebody who will know that on this earth there is an ??
African saying :
"When an elder dies, it is as if an entire library has burned to the ground."
With lots of love at this special time which is Christmas
napisalabym tak.
There is an old African saying :'When an elder.........ground'.
Cytat:
Feast of all Saints (nazwy WLASNE piszemy duzymi literami)
all też.