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I’m going to talk about how will global warming change the way we live in the future.
The effects global warming are: melting of glaciers, increase water level and temperature. Certainly will change us live.

Firstly, In many places on the Earth observed increase in the average air temperature. This may cause melting of glaciers and ultimately increase water level 'as a result the water level will rise and cities located near the coasts will be flooded.

Secondly, shift in climate zones on the Earth will a lot disasters. The effects of this may be hurricane, forest fire, drought. Many animals and plant disappear of earth, because climate will change and die in disasters.

Moving on to rise to many diseases caused of global warming. Including with malaria. A result of this many people die.

Well, the consequences of global warming on the Earth are obvious - many people die as a result of the growing number of natural disasters. Even more people will die from hunger and as a result of new diseases.

To sum up, global warming change the way we live in the future.
I’m going to talk about 'how will' (the ways in which) global warming change the way we live in the future.
The effects IF global warming are: melting of glaciers, increase OF water level and temperature. Certainly THIS will change 'us' OUR 'live' LIFE.

Firstly, In many places on 'the' (niepotr) Earth PEOPLE observed increase in the average air temperature. This may cause melting of glaciers and ultimately increase IN THE water level 'as a result the water level will rise and cities located near the coasts will be flooded.

Secondly, shift in THE climate zones on 'the' (niepotr) Earth will CREATE a lot disasters. The effects of this may be hurricane, forest fire, drought. Many animals and plant WILL disappear 'of earth' (niepotr), because OF climate 'will' (niepotr) change and WILL die in disasters.

Moving on to rise 'to' OF many diseases caused 'of' BY global warming. Including 'with' (niepotr) malaria. AS A result of this many people WILL die.

Well, the consequences of global warming on 'the' (niepotr) Earth are obvious - many people die as a result of the growing number of natural disasters.
To sum up, global warming WILL change the way we live in the future.
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I’m going to talk about 'how will' (the ways in which) global warming change the way we live in the future.
The effects IF global warming are: melting of glaciers, increase OF water level and temperature. Certainly THIS will change 'us' OUR 'live' LIFE.

Firstly, In many places on 'the' (niepotr) Earth PEOPLE observed increase in the average air temperature. This may cause melting of glaciers and ultimately increase IN THE water level 'as a result the water level will rise and cities located near the coasts will be flooded.

Secondly, shift in THE climate zones on 'the' (niepotr) Earth will CREATE a lot disasters. The effects of this may be hurricane, forest fire, drought. Many animals and plant WILL disappear 'of earth' (niepotr), because OF climate 'will' (niepotr) change and WILL die in disasters.

Moving on to rise 'to' OF many diseases caused 'of' BY global warming. Including 'with' (niepotr) malaria. AS A result of this many people WILL die.

Well, the consequences of global warming on 'the' (niepotr) Earth are obvious - many people die as a result of the growing number of natural disasters.
To sum up, global warming WILL change the way we live in the future.

'will' in the very first sentence?( but in a different position than originally)
edytowany przez grudziu: 05 gru 2012
masz racje, grudziu, powinno byc...global warming WILL change the way...
Albo napiszemy calkiem nowe zadanie na jeszcze lepszy stopien.
Many animals and ONE plant will disappear..../???/

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