Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie rozprawki na temat: 2. Napisz rozprawkę, w której przedstawisz wady i zalety turystycznych lotów w kosmos.
Nie jest to wypracowanie wysokiego poziomu, dlatego chętnie posłucham wszelkich rad, zarówno dotyczących poprawności jak i całej reszty ;) z góry dzięki za pomoc.
It is told that space travels become more and more available even for ordinary people. You just have to have enough amount of money to make yours dream come true. Not only is this situation a bed of roses, but it has also got some drawbacks.
First of all, this kind of trip may be very educational. You can get to know how the mechanism of space travels works, how astronauts can survive in such a dangerous conditions and how it ist o be so far from home. Moreover you can meet some unique and interesting people. Furthermore it is very exciting and unforgettable event, which may changes your whole life! You can see the Earth from another perspective, what is unreachable for most people.
On the other hand there are some negative aspects of doing it, either. For instance you have no confidence, that you came back alive. This kind of tourism is highly risky. Not to mention the fact that this pleasure will cost you a huge amount of money. Not everyone can afford to this. Last but not least money and work of many people which is invested in your entertainment should be used in more useful way, to grow the knowledge of all mankind.
Looking at all for and against arguments mentioned above, it seems as clear as daylight that space tourism have both advantages and shortcomings. It is popularly believed that, everyone can run his money in his own way, but it strikes me that a lot of money are used in such a selfish way.