help ! potrzebuje pomocy chodzi o sprawdzenie tekstu :)

jest to strszczenie pr magisterskiej przetłumaczyłam to ale chciala bym sie dowiedziec czy dobrze :)
Streszczenie

Nie ulega wątpliwości, iż szczególna regulacja prawna przewidująca wzmożoną ochronę prawnokarną funkcjonariuszy publicznych oraz osób do pomocy im przybranych znajduje swoje umocowanie w tym, że Rzeczpospolita Polska - poprzez swoje organy zapewnia wolności i prawa człowieka i obywatela, a także bezpieczeństwo obywateli (art. 5 Konstytucji RP). Zapewnienie owych praw i wolności nie byłoby możliwe bez wyposażenia organów państwowych oraz funkcjonariuszy publicznych w określone kompetencje, których realizacja służyć ma zabezpieczeniu tych praw oraz wolności. Z uwagi na konieczność zagwarantowania niezakłóconego realizowania tych kompetencji, zagwarantowania przestrzegania praw i wolności obywatelskich konieczna jest szczególna ochrona prawnokarna funkcjonariuszy publicznych oraz osób do pomocy im przybranych. Jednym z instrumentów gwarantujących funkcjonariuszom publicznym sprawne wykonywanie obowiązków służbowych jest ich prawnokarna ochrona przed zamachami na ich nietykalność cielesną.
W związku z powyższym, omówieniu przestępstwa naruszenia nietykalności cielesnej funkcjonariusza publicznego lub osoby do pomocy mu przybranej, podczas lub w związku z pełnieniem obowiązków służbowych, podporządkowano strukturę niniejszej pracy. Z uwagi na temat niniejszego opracowania w pierwszej kolejności omówiono konstytucyjną i ustawową regulację ochrony nietykalności cielesnej. W dalszych rozważaniach skupiono się na kwestii ochrony prawnej funkcjonariusza publicznego oraz na przestępstwach dotyczących naruszenia jego nietykalności cielesnej. W ostatniej części pracy zaprezentowano dynamikę i strukturę omawianego przestępstwa w latach 1999-2012.














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It is beyond doubt that the special law regulation providing for enhanced protection of public officials and people who help them is true. In the fact that the Republic of Poland - through their organs of government ensure the freedoms , rights of man and citizen, as well the safety of citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution RP).
Ensuring these rights and freedoms would not be possible without furnish state authorities and public officials with specific competence, the implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedom. In view of the need to ensure the undisturbed implementation of these competence, to ensure that the rights and freedoms requires special law protection of public officials and people who help them.
One of the instruments to ensure the proper functioning of public officials duties Criminal Law is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability.


Accordingly , discussion of the physical integrity of the offense violation of a public official or person to help him , during or in connection with the performance official duties subordinated to the structure of this work. The comments on this document first describes constitutional and statutory regulation of the protection of physical inviolability.
The further considerations focuses on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of the physical inviolability. In the last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime in the years 1999-2012.

It is beyond doubt that the special law regulation providing for enhanced protection of public officials and people who help them is 'true' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo, jak to moze byc 'prawda'-pomysl). 'In the fact' (tego nie rozumiem) that the Republic of Poland (RP) - through 'their' ( o ilu krajach tutaj mowa?) organs of government ensureS the freedoms, rights of man and citizen, as well the safety of citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).
Ensuring these rights and freedoms would not be possible without 'furnish' (dziwne slowo, nie pasuje tutaj) state authorities and public officials with specific competence, the implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and 'freedom' 9generalnie piszemy 'freedoms') (nie napisalas czyje? musisz napisac 'ze ludzi'). In view of the need to ensure the undisturbed implementation of 'these competence' (to jest zle), to ensure that the rights and freedoms 'requires' (dlacego dajesz 3os.l.poj jak masz l. mn rzeczownikow?) special law protection of public officials and people who help them.
One of the instruments to ensure the 'proper' (za potoczne slowo- i co to znaczy 'proper'/improper?) functioning of public 'officials duties' (cos tu nie tak Criminal Law is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability. (napisz to zdanie inaczej, wychodzi maslo)

Accordingly , discussion of the physical integrity of 'the' (po co to?) offense violation of a public official or (przedimek) person to help him , during or in connection with the performance (cos brak) official duties (cos brak) subordinated to the structure of this work. The comments on this document first 'describes' (zle slowo) constitutional and statutory regulation of the protection of physical inviolability.
The further 'considerations focuses' (pomysl) on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
In the last part of the work 'presents the dynamics and structure of the crime in the years 1999-2012' ...are presented.

Przeczytalam te slowa, ale zdania sa tak dziwnie zbudowane, ze calkowicie nie rozumiem o co tu chodzi i dokladnie co ta twoja praca daje.

czyli jak powinno??? być pozmieniałam troche czy mógłby mi ktoś napisać poprawne formy ?? zielona jestem... bardzo dziękuje za pomoc !!!
It is beyond doubt that the special law regulation providing for enhanced protection of public officials and people who help them.The Republic of Poland (RP) - through Polish organs of government ensureS the freedoms, rights of man and citizen, as well the safety of citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).Ensuring these rights and freedoms would not be possible without provide people with state authorities and public officials with specific competence, the implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedoms of people. In view of the need to ensure the undisturbed implementation of the competence (to jest zle), to ensure that the rights and freedoms require special law protection of public officials and people who help them.
One of the instruments like Criminal Law is ensure the functioning of public their officials duties. Is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability.
Accordingly , discussion of the physical integrity of offense violation of a public official or a person to help him , during or in connection with the performance the official duties of subordinated to the structure of this work. The comments on this document first presented constitutional and statutory regulation of the protection of physical inviolability.
The further attention is focused on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
In the last part of the work are presented the dynamics and structure of the crime in the years 1999-2012'

It is beyond doubt that the special law 'regulation' (tego wcale nie lubie, lepiej 'regulating the) proviSION 'for' OF enhanced protection of public officials and 'people who help them' (dlaczego nie mozna napisac 'and their assistants') (tutaj musi byc reszta zdania...The Republic of Poland (RP) - through Polish organs of government ensureS the freedoms, 'rights of man and citizen' (cos mi tu przypomina French Revolution - nie tedy droga), as well the safety of citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).
Ensuring these rights and freedoms (for the people) would not be possible without THE PROVISION 'people with' (niepotr) OF 'state authorities' (czy state authority moze miec competence?) and public officials with specific 'competence' (teraz widze, ze to zle slowo), the implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedoms of people. (to zdanie wyglada mi na maslo maslane)
In view of the need to ensure the 'undisturbed' (poszukaj innego slowa) implementation of the competence (to jest zle), 'to ensure' ENSURING 'that' (niepotr) the rights and freedoms requireS 'special law' (?) protection of public officials and people who help them.
One of the instruments 'like' (znowu piszesz ze cos 'lubisz' ale ja nie widze co - prosze nie uzywac slowa 'like' w ten sposob - to jest po prostu BLAD, ma byc SUCH AS) Criminal Law is TO ensure the functioning of 'public their officials' (co to jest?) duties.
....Is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability....(to nie jest zdaniem)
Accordingly , discussion of the physical integrity of offense violation of a public official or 'a person to help him' (their assistants) , during or in connection with the performance the official duties 'of subordinated' (co to jest?) to the structure of this work.
The 'comments' (jakie comments?) on this document 'first presented' (a kiedy to bylo?) constitutional and statutory regulation of the protection of physical inviolability.
'The' (niepotr) 'Further attention' (tutaj masz napisac w ktorym chapter) is focused on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
'In' (niepotr)The last part of the work 'are presented' (to mnie az razi,m PRESENTS) the dynamics and structure of the crime (jakiego 'crime') in the years 1999-2012

Musisz to jeszcze raz napisac, zeby to mialo rece i nogi. Chcesz pisac slowo w slowo z polskiego, a to calkowicie nie wychodzi.

udało mi sie znów coś poprawic :) pomocy!! przeraża mnie to ! ;/
It is beyond doubt that the special law regulating the proviSION OF enhanced protection of public officials and their assistants who help them.The Republic of Poland (RP) - through Polish organs of government ensureS the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).
Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the people would not be possible without THE PROVISION OF state authorities and public officials with specific reference .
The implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedoms of people.In view of the need to ensure the 'unhindered czy smooth ??? implementation of the reference , ENSURING the rights and freedoms requireS law protection of public officials and people who help them.
One of the instruments SUCH AS Criminal Law is TO ensure the functioning of public officials duties. This is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability .Accordingly , discussion of the physical integrity of offense violation of a public official or their assistants , during or in connection with the performance the official duties to the structure of this work.
The document first presents constitutional and statutory regulation of the protection of physical inviolability.Further attention is focused on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
The last part of the work are presents the dynamics and structure of the crime such as physical inviolability in the years 1999-2012

czy teraz juz jest ok ?

'It is beyond doubt' (napisz Undoubtedly,) 'that' (niepotr) 'the' (niepotr) special law regulating the proviSION OF enhanced protection of public officials and their assistants 'who help them' (niepotr) (tutaj brakuje duzo..(primarily relies on legal instruments) OF THE Republic of Poland (RP) - 'through Polish' (niepotr) 'organs of government' (nie, zrob to inaczej.... WHICH) ensure the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of ALL citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP). (teraz nie wiem, czy powinnas napisac tu dokladnie co ten Art 5 miesci)
Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the people would not be possible without THE PROVISION OF state authorities and public officials with specific reference (ale do czego, tutaj brakuje reszte zdania) .
The implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedoms of people....(czy to zdanie ma sie laczyc z poprzednim?)

.....In 'view of the need' (niepotr) ORDER to ensure the UNHINDERED implementation of the 'reference' (to jest calkowicie zle slow, tutaj masz na mysli po prostu 'zabezpieczenia prawne) , PROTECTING the rights and freedoms requireS 'law protection of public officials' (tego nie rozumiem) and 'people who help them' (nie pisz tak, bo to wyglada, ze panie ktore zamiataja i czyszcza biura tez sa tutaj chronione, ty wiecej mowisz o oficjalnych ludziach - tzn assistants)....(to jest calkowicie niezrozumiale - nie wiem o co chodzi),. (nad tym zdaniem musimy jeszcze raz popracowac.)

....One of the instruments 'SUCH AS' (zle to uzylas, ja tak nie pisalam...IS) Criminal Law is ensure the functioning of public officials duties. ...To zdanie niema dla mnie sensu teraz...,nie rozumiem czy to zdanie ma isc z poprzednimi?

This is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability. (ja bym polaczyla to zdanie z poprzednimi - jak jakos sie podporzadkujemy)

Accordingly , discussion of the '''physical integrity' (w zlym miejscu) of offense violation''(nie, tutaj masz calkowicie cos innego na mysli...napoisz ...the offence of violation of the physical' integrity' (czy tutaj myslisz o niedotylkalnosci?) of 'a' (niepotr) public officialS or their assistants , during or in connection with the performanceOF theIR official duties IS THE BASIS FOR THE 'to the' (niepotr) structure of this work.

The 'document' THESIS 'first' (niepotr) presents THE constitutional and statutory regulationS of the protection of physical inviolability .' Further attention' (tego calkowicie nie lubie - (napisz ...Detailed illustrations focus on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
The last part of the work 'are' (po co to?) presents the dynamics and structure of the crime 'such as' (niepotr) OF physical inviolability in the years 1999-2012

wykończe sie :) bardzo dziekuje za pomoc :) bede chyba dozgonnie wdzieczna :):) nanioslam poprawki i teraz to wyglada tak : miejmy nadzieje ze zblizam sie do poprawnej wersji :)

Undoubtedly special law regulating the proviSION OF enhanced protection of public officials and their assistants primarily relies on legal instruments OF THE Republic of Poland (RP) - witch ensure the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of ALL citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the people would not be possible without THE PROVISION OF state authorities and public officials with specific reference to
the implementation of which is to help and protect the rights and freedoms of people.

In ORDER to ensure the UNHINDERED implementation of the legal safeguards ?? czy ten zwrot pasuje?, PROTECTING the rights and freedoms of public officials' and assistants. choczilo mi o to zdanie : Z uwagi na konieczność zagwarantowania niezakłóconego realizowania tych kompetencji, zagwarantowania przestrzegania praw i wolności obywatelskich konieczna jest szczególna ochrona prawnokarna funkcjonariuszy publicznych oraz osób do pomocy im przybranych.
One of the instruments IS Criminal Law is ensure the functioning of public officials duties which
is the protection against attacks on their physical inviolability.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of the physical' integrity' ( chodzi mi tu o nietykalnosc cielesna ,moze tak zostac ??) of public officialS or their assistants , during or in connection with the performanceOF theIR official duties IS THE BASIS FOR THE structure of this work.
The THESIS presents THE constitutional and statutory regulationS of the protection of physical inviolability ...Detailed illustrations focus on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
The last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime OF physical inviolability in the years 1999-2012

Teraz widze, ze slowo 'assistants' ktore chcialam uzyc, nie jest najlepsze i moze slowo 'subordinates' lepiej pasuje. Tez zalezy ile slow ma byc w tym 'extract'

Undoubtedly special law regulating the proviSION OF enhanced protection of public officials and their'assistants' (subordinates) primarily relies on legal instruments OF THE Republic of Poland (RP) - 'witch' (nie, tutaj WHICH, bo 'witch-to jest czarownica) 'ensure' (mysle, ze DEFEND jest lepiej) the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of ALL citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the 'people' (nie wiem czy 'population/citizens/?) would not be possible without THE PROVISION BY state authorities 'and' OF public officials with WHO ARE TASKED WITH 'specific reference to the' (niepotr) THE implementation of LAWS which 'is to' (niepotr) help and protect the rights and freedoms of THESE people.......

In ORDER to ensure the UNHINDERED implementation of the legal safeguards DEFENDING the rights and freedoms of public officials and THEIR 'assistants' (subordinates) IT IS imperitive that appropriate legal safeguards are in place TO PROTECT these public officials and their'assistants' (subordinates) .

One of the instruments IS Criminal Law WHICH functioNS AS means of 'protection of' SAFEGUARDING public officials against attacks on their physical inviolability.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of the physical 'integrity' (wyzej masz inviolability) of public officialS or their 'assistants' (subordinates) , during or in connection with the performance OF theIR official duties IS THE BASIS FOR THE structure of this work.

The THESIS presents THE constitutional and statutory regulationS of the protection of physical inviolability ...Detailed illustrations focus on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
The last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime OF physical inviolability in the years 1999-2012

cos za duzo razy uzywamny slowo 'protection' ale nic innego nie przychodzi mi teraz do glowy...trzeba cos pozmieniac.

wersja osteczna ??:) miejmy nadzieje :) mozna zamiast protecion uzyc słowka to safeguard??? :)

Undoubtedly special law regulating the proviSION OF enhanced protection of public officials and their subordinates primarily relies on legal instruments OF THE Republic of Poland (RP) - WHICH DEFEND the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of ALL citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution OF RP).

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the citizens would not be possible without THE PROVISION BY state authorities OF public officials with WHO ARE TASKED WITH THE implementation of LAWS which help and protect the rights and freedoms of THESE people.

In ORDER to ensure the UNHINDERED implementation of the legal safeguards DEFENDING the rights and freedoms of public officials and THEIR subordinates IT IS imperitive that appropriate legal safeguards are in place TO PROTECT these public officials and their subordinates.
One of the instruments IS Criminal Law WHICH functioNS AS means of SAFEGUARDING public officials against attacks on their physical inviolability.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of the physical inviolability of public officialS or their subordinates , during or in connection with the performance OF theIR official duties IS THE BASIS FOR THE structure of this work.

The THESIS presents THE constitutional and statutory regulationS of the protection of physical inviolability ...Detailed illustrations focus on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of theIR physical inviolability.
The last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime OF physical inviolability in the years 1999-2012

A jak sama czytasz ta wersje, to co myslisz o tym? Lepiej jak pierwsza wersja?

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the citizens would not be possible without THE PROVISION BY state authorities OF (tutaj znowu mi cos brakuje-SAFEGUARDING THE LIVES OF ) public officials 'with' (niepotr) WHO ARE TASKED WITH THE implementation of LAWS which help and protect the rights and freedoms of THESE people.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of 'the' (wg mnnie teraz to'the' niepotrz,) physical inviolability of public officialS or their subordinates , during or in connection with the performance OF theIR official duties IS THE BASIS FOR THE structure of this work.

The last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime OF physical inviolability 'in' (tutaj dalabym DURING) the years 1999-2012

jasne ze lepsza niz pierwsza wresja :):) bardzo dziekuje Ci za pomoc :):):)

a teraz zdaj dobrze.

taka wersje mam zamniar podac :):) nie za duzo uzywamy of???;D dziekuje bardzo napewno bedzie dobrze :):):)

Summary

Undoubtedly special law regulating the provision of enhanced protection of public officials and their subordinates primarily relies on legal instruments of the Republic of Poland (RP) - which defend the freedoms, rights of all citizen, as well the safety of all citizens
(Article 5 of the Constitution of RP).

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the citizens would not be possible without the provision by state authorities of safeguarding the lives of public officials who are tasked with the implementation of laws which help and protect the rights and freedoms of these people.

In order to ensure the unhindered implementation of the legal safeguards defending the rights and freedoms of public officials and their subordinates it is imperative that appropriate legal safeguards are in place to protect these public officials and their subordinates.
One of the instruments is Criminal Law which functions as means of safeguarding public officials against attacks on their physical inviolability.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of physical inviolability of public officials or their subordinates , during or in connection with the performance of their official duties is the basis for the structure of this work.

The thesis presents the constitutional and statutory regulations of the protection of physical inviolability . Detailed illustrations focus on the legal protection of a public official, and the crimes of violation of their physical inviolability.
The last part of the work presents the dynamics and structure of the crime of physical inviolability during the years 1999-2012.

Jeszcze znalazlam troche poprawek, zobaczysz co promotor Ci powie.

Undoubtedly (dalabym to przecinek, ) special law regulating the provision of enhanced protection of public officials and their subordinates primarily relies on legal instruments of the Republic of Poland (RP) - which defend the freedoms, rights 'of all citizen' (tego nie potrzeba, bo sie powtarza), as well the safety of all citizens (Article 5 of the Constitution of RP).

Ensuring these rights and freedoms for the citizens would not be possible without the provision by state authorities of 'safeguarding' (tutaj troche zmienimy - legal protection which safeguards) the lives of public officials who are tasked with the implementation of THE laws which help and protect the rights and freedoms of these people.

In order to ensure the unhindered implementation of the legal safeguards defending the rights and freedoms of public officials and their subordinates (daj tutaj przecinek) it is imperative that appropriate legal safeguards are in place to protect these public officials and their subordinates.

Accordingly , discussion of the offence of violation of physical inviolability of public officials or their subordinates , during or in connection with the performance of their official duties is the basis for the structure of this work.
czyli ten fragment pozostaje bez zmian bo zastanawiam sie czy nie za duzo tego of ale nie mam pomyslu jak to zmienic ;/

Accordingly , discussion of 'the' (niepotr) offenceS of violation of physical inviolability (moze, directed towards public officials) 'of public officials' or their subordinates , during or in connection with the performance of their official duties is the basis for the structure of this work.

bardzo dziekuje :****