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I am writing in connection with the hiring me for a work placement in your travel agency in Poland. I have never been to Europe. I do not know what I can expect for my future work-place. Could you give me some information about my work placement? I would like to know, what I should wear to work. I would be interested in knowing, what are the working hours. I wonder if you could tell me what time is lunch break? I would like to ask what are my responsibilities at work. I will be grateful if you can send me this information.

I'm happy because I will be working in Poland. This country is very interesting. I look forward to working in your agency. thanks to this job I will have the experience and I will get to know the country.

I look forward to your answer.
Cytat: monis333
I am writing in connection with hiring me in your travel agency in Poland. I have never been to Europe. I do not know what to expect in my future workplace. Could you give me some information about my work placement? I would like to know, what to wear to work. I would be interested in knowing your working hours. I wonder if you could tell me the time of the lunch break? I also would like to ask you about my responsibilities at work. I will be grateful if you can send me this information.

I'm happy because I will be working in Poland. This country is very interesting. I look forward to working in your agency. thanks to this job I will gain experience and I get to know the country.

I'm looking forward to your answer.

now it should be fine
edytowany przez kullub: 12 gru 2013
tak, tylko trzeba to teraz podzielic na poprawne 'paragraphs'.

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