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My favorite ways of spending free time



I like free time, but I don’t have it much, especially recently. When I have spare time I try to spend it with my family. We often go on trips around the country, recently we are able to go to Kazimierz Dolny, Pisz or Zakopane for a few days. Then I have a time to explore and shows sea, lake, mountains and some monuments to my son. He is 2 years old and loves a car trips. When I do not have that much time I like swim in pool or ride a bike with my family. Sometimes I like listening to music and reading fantasy books. Therefore i am not bored and I was allways spending a good time.

I like free time, but I don’t have 'it much' (nie, lepiej...much of it), especially recently.
We often go on trips around the country, recently we 'are' (tutaj czas przeszly, bo to juz bylo) able to go to Kazimierz Dolny, Pisz or Zakopane for a few days.
Then I have 'a' (niepotr) time to explore and 'shows' (to ma sie zgadzac z 'I') (przedimek) sea, lake, mountains and some monuments to my son. He is 2 years old and loves 'a' (co jest z tym 'a' - niepotr) car trips. When I do not have that much time I like (cos brak) swim in (przedimek) pool or ride a bike with my family.
Therefore 'i' (popraw - zawsze DUZA litera) am not bored and I 'was' (niepotr) 'allways' (ortog) 'spending' (zle slowo, daj tutaj 'have') a good time.

Teraz będzie ok ?



My favorite ways of spending free time



I like free time, but I don’t have much of it, especially recently. When I have spare time I try to spend it with my family. We often go on trips around the country, recently we was able to go to Kazimierz Dolny, Pisz or Zakopane for a few days. Then I have time to explore and show a sea, lake, mountains and some monuments to my son. He is 2 years old and loves car trips. When I don`t have that much time I like swiming in a pool or ride a bike which my family. Sometimes I like listening to music and reading fantasy books. Therefore I am not bored and I always having a good time.