Pomoc

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Hej :) Mam do Was ogromną prośbę o sprawdzenie mojej rozprawki, którą muszę jutro oddać. Zależy od niej moja ocena z angielskiego i dlatego zawracam Wam gitarę, czego normalnie staram sie nie robić :) Nie przedłużając:



TEMAT: Coraz więcej osób, zamiast gotować obiady w domu, korzysta z gotowych dań kupionych w supermarketach. Napisz rozprawkę, w której przedstawisz wady i zalety takiego odżywiania.



We live in a constant hurry, always busy, always having to do something. More and more people don't have enough time even to prepare their meal so buying ready food. Is it a good idea? Let's look at advantages and disadvantages that type of food.

Firstly, meals sold in the supermarket are easy and not time-consuming in preparation. It suits to a model of human in modern society, who often doesn't have enough time to prepare a meal. Ready dishes are relatively cheap and don't require much effort. They are also tasty(mostly) and even person without much experience in cooking can prepare it. For majority people who can't cook well, the ready-to-eat dishes are blessing until they learn how to not poison themselves. :)

On the other hand, buying in the supermarkets, consumer does't know exactly what is in that meal. It may be things that most people wouldn't want to eat. Moreover, when you put some effort into preparing meal you will surely enjoy it more than just earlier bought food, because it was cooked exactly the way you wanted. Another drawback is vanishing of the cooking abilities when they are not used. It is not a good thing especially when you have to cook for somebody.

To sum up, eating previous prepared meals from supermarket has got as much drawbacks as advantages. The most suitable kind of eating depends on the kind of life the person lead, but if consumer have time to cook, it would be more profits from doing it.



Z góry dzięki za pomoc :)
Osobiście prponuję takie zmiany:

We live in a constant hurry, always busy, always having to do something[zła kolejność]. More and more people don't have enough time even to prepare their meals[przecinek] so THEY buying[inna forma] ready food. Is it a good idea? Let's look at advantages and disadvantages that type of food.

Firstly, meals sold in the supermarket are easy and not time-consuming in preparation[zmieniłbym na: ... and don't take much time]. It suits to[it fits in]a model of human in[of] modern society, who often doesn't[don't = people] have enough time to prepare a meal. Ready dishes are relatively cheap and don't require much effort. They are also tasty(mostly) and even person[przedimek przed person] without much experience in cooking can prepare it. For majority [brakuje of]people who can't cook well, the ready-to-eat dishes are blessing until[może lepiej unless] they learn how to not[not to] poison themselves. :)
edytowany przez calf: 31 mar 2014
dziękuję :* właśnie mnie ratujesz :)
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It's never easy to find your first job, particulary in diffcult economic times. Therefore more and more young people decide to connect study and part-time job. If you one of young adults who have gruelling schedule and your parents pressurize uoy to get a good marks you should change your lifestyle.
Firts of all it's the most important to look for work in the area where you live. This way you don't use public transport so you will have a lot of hourse to spend studing. Conequently you don't must buy monthly ticket so you save a lot of money. The money you could spend to buy more interesting books which help you prepare for an exam.
Another way of improving the situation is draw up a sensible study timetable which organize your whole day and give you one day on rest. The result you won't fail behind with your studies.That way you won't overwork yourself and you will be able to perform your best in both your job and at university.
In summary, connect studies and part-time job it is't pices of cake like saying old trades.

Nie jesteem pewna co do zakończenia przydały by się jeszcze 2 zdania .

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