Proszę o sprawdzenie character reference

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A friend of yours has applied for a job as a local guide for a London-based holiday company, which specializes in tours in your country for elderly British people. You have been asked to write character reference for your friend, commenting on his previous experience, relevant knowledge and any personal qualities which might be useful for the job.


To whom it may concern

Peter Nowak

As the best friend of Peter Nowak I have known and spend time with him for nearly 10 years. During this time our friendship has got stronger and now we know almost everything about each other.

At each stage in Peter's education, he has shown great enthusiasm for learning and has always managed to combine friendly, outgoing nature with a school duties. His ability to explanation has saved my life a lot of times before test.

He is interested in history of Warsaw and that topic takes him much time. Last year he took a first place in the competition called 'Prewar Warsaw'. He can be impatient sometimes and does have a tendency to irritate quickly. However, he is working on it and I suppose he is on the right way to stop this behavior.

Indeed, his ability to guide people and take their attention is one of his greatest strengths, particularly in this field of work. Also he has excellend organizational skills. For 3 years he has been a guide in our high school and he was showing round visitors historical places. Naturally with his experience he is familiar with all aspects of guide work and quickly assimilates new developments.

For these reasons I am confident that Peter has the right qualities for this job and have no hesitation in supporting his application.
Uwagi sa tylko w zdaniach ktore tu sa zaznaczone, reszta ok.

As 'the best friend of Peter Nowak' (moze inaczej, As PN's best friend) I have known and spend time with him for nearly 10 years.

At each stage in Peter's education, he has shown great enthusiasm for learning and has always managed to combine (tu brak przedimka 'a') friendly, outgoing nature with 'a' (niepotr przedimek, ale ja dalabym 'his') school duties. His ability to 'explanation' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj potrzeba czasownika) has saved my life 'a lot of times' (jest inne slowo ' numerously' - sprawdz w slowniku) before (tu brak przedimka) test.

He is interested in (tu brak przedimka) history of Warsaw and 'that' (niepotr - ja bym to zrobila inaczej, po polsku, ...ten topic zawiera duze jego czasu) 'topic takes him much time' (niepotr). 'Last year' (lepiej jest podac dokladny rok - np In 2013) he took 'a' (zly przedimek) first place in 'the' (ja mysle tutaj o innym przedimku) competition called 'Prewar Warsaw'. He can be impatient sometimes and does have a tendency to (tutaj cos brakuje, bo z tego wyglada, ze to wlasnie on irituje inne osoby, a ty chciales napisac, ze on sam sie irituje, to trzeba....to BE) irritateD quickly. However, he is working on it and I suppose he is on the right 'way' (moze inne slowo 'path') to 'stop' ('stop' jest ok, ale tez mozna 'minimise'-sprawdz w slowniku) this behavior.

Indeed, his ability to guide people and 'take' (to jest zle slowo) their attention is one of his greatest strengths, particularly in 'this' (tutaj wystarczy przedimek) field of work. 'Also' (ja bym to slowo zlikwidowala) He has 'excellend' (ortog.) organizational skills. For 3 years he has been a guide in our high school and (dodaj cos tutaj...jego obowiazkiem bylo tez) 'he was' (niepotr) showing 'round' (wg mnie niepotr slowo) visitors (cos tutaj dodaj, np. 'interesting' albo 'old') historical places'. Naturally with his experience he is familiar with all aspects of guide work and quickly assimilates new developments.

@kuczek

I have known and spend time with him for 10 years >>> czemu nie zmieniłeś formy drugiego czasownika?
Cytat: zielonosiwy
@kuczek
I have known and spend time with him for 10 years >>> czemu nie zmieniłeś formy drugiego czasownika?

sorry, moja wina, nie zauwazylam, tam moze byc SPENT''
Dziękuję bardzo za pomoc!

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