Sprawdzenie dwóch prac

Witam, mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić błędy w poniższych pracach? :)

1 Temat- supermarket or corner shop

The most i like shoping in supermarket. There is more products than corner shops.The products are cheaper too. Often you can find very attractive promotions. There is also more time to reflect. Shoping in supermarket is pleasure for me.

2. Temat- kraj anglojęzyczny do którego chciałbym polecieć.

I really would like to go to Australia, because it's an interesting place to visit.
There are many places that I'd like to see. Few of them is for sure: Sydney Opera House, Great Barrier Reef and Blue Mountains. I guess that atmosphere there is very nice. People don't look at others and they're just themselves. I hope that one day I'll go there.

Dziękuję :)

1 Temat- supermarket or corner shop
'The most' (nie za bardzo trafne okreslenie, za duzo polskie) 'i' (to zawsze piszemy duza litera) like shoping in (brak przedimka) supermarket. There 'is' (ten czasownik musi sie zgadzac z rzreczownikiem products-l. mn) more products than (tu brakuje slowa) corner shops.
Often (ale tutaj musisz napisac gdzie)you can find very attractive promotions. There is also more time to reflect (ale nad czym? musisz napisac). 'Shoping' (blad ortog) in (przedimek) supermarket is (przedimek) pleasure for me.

2. Temat- kraj anglojęzyczny do którego chciałbym polecieć.
I 'really would' (wg mnie zla kolejnosc slow) like to go to Australia, because it's an interesting place to visit.
Few of them 'is' (ale to ma sie zgadzac z 'few' co daje mi znac, ze jest wiecej jak jeden) for sure: (ja dalabym tutaj przedimek) Sydney Opera House, (przedimek) Great Barrier Reef and (przedimek) Blue Mountains. I guess that (przedimek) atmosphere there is very nice. People don't look at (tutaj mozesz cos dodac, np. 'oceniaja') others and they're just themselves.

Uwazaj na te przedimki. Musisz je doszlifowac.