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1. Your favourite film.

My favourite film is "Avatar". This is the action and fantasy film. I don't usually watch that kinds of films, but this one is an except. "Avatar" was directed by James Cameron, he is also the screenwriter of this blockbuster. As everyone knows, this movie was another big Cameron's success after "Titanic". "Avatar" was released in December in 2009. This box-office hit won 3 Oscar Awards and 2 Golden Globes. The film is about extraterrestial beings who live on a planet called Pandora. People who came from the Earth do reaserch on this planet, they exeprience wealthiness of wildlife, the behaviour of the tribes. The main character who is human personates one of the Navi - this the name of the tribe. Then he fell in love with one of the savage and helps them to protect their planet from scientists. This movie keeps in suspense during watching, especially if u watch it in 3D. Then you can percive special effects. The lead role was played by Sam Worthing. The film was so successful that there is a plan to make a sequel. I can strongly recommend this blockbuster for every filmgoer.

2. The worst film you have ever seen.

The worst film I have ever seen was "New moon". Althought it was a box-office hit, I wouldn't recommend it to anyone. This movie is the adpatation of Stephanie Mayer's book. It is the sequel of "Twilight Saga". The female lead is Kristen Stewart and male lead is Robert Pattinson. The actress can't play, she doesn't show any emotions or feeling during whole story. The film's plot is action-packed, there is no climax. The offical film't category is horror, but it wasn't terrifying at all. The special effects was made on low budget. When werewolves appeared on the screen, they looked like an editor made them with the cheapest progamme. Even some critics percived the bad idea of general realese. "New moon" won 5 Golden Rasberries - the opposite akwards of Oscars.
The lead role was played by Sam Worthing. really? Są inne literówki;)
edytowany przez fui_eu: 05 cze 2014
This is 'the' (zly przedimek) action and fantasy film. I don't usually watch 'that' (zle slowo, tutaj 'those') kinds of films, but this one is an 'except' (dokoncz slowo).
'As everyone knows' (nie pisz tak, bo nie 'everyone' - ja np nigdy o tym filmie nie slyszalam, to nie moze byc 'everyone'), this 'movie' (dlaczego raz 'film' a raz 'movie, jedno jest BrE okreslenie, drugie AmE okreslenie - nie mieszaj, bo to znaczy, ze nie rozpoznajesz tego) was 'another big' (w zlym miejscu) Cameron's (daj to tutaj) success after "Titanic". "Avatar" was released in December 'in' (niepotr) 2009.
People who came from the Earth 'do' (nie, to jest kolokwalnie, i tego nie rob, tutaj 'are undertaking') 'reaserch' (blad ortog) on this planet, they 'exeprience' (ortog) 'wealthiness' (to slowo nie istnieje jeszcze, daj poprawne) of wildlife(,) (nie dawaj przecinka, jak masz tylko jedna dodatke, tutaj AND) the behaviour of the tribes. The main character who is human 'personates' (cos dla mnie to jest zle slowo, nie wiem co masz na mysli) one of the Navi - this the name of the tribe. Then he 'fell' (zly czas tutaj) in love with one of the 'savage' (albo 'savages' albo 'savage girls') and helps them to protect their planet from (brak przedimka) scientists. This 'movie' (zmien) keeps (kogo? czego? musisz napisac) in suspense during watching IT, especially if 'u ' (napisz to slowo w calosci, nie wiem co to znaczy) watch it in 3D. Then you can 'percive' (ortog) (brak przedimka) special effects. The lead role 'was' (IS) played by Sam Worthing.

This 'movie' (popraw) is 'the' (zly przedimek) ' adpatation' (ortog) of Stephanie Mayer's book. It is the sequel of (brtak przedimka) "Twilight Saga". The female lead is Kristen Stewart and (przedimek) male lead is Robert Pattinson. The actress can't 'play' (nie, tutaj 'act'), she doesn't show any emotions or feeling during (przedimek) whole story.
The offical 'film't category' (nie, napisz to normalnie 'category of the film') is horror, but it wasn't terrifying at all. The special effects 'was' (effects-l. mnoga, musi byc czasownik l. mn) made on (przedimek) low budget. When (przedimek) 'werewolves' (ortog) appeared on the screen, they looked like an editor made them with the cheapest 'progamme' (ortog, ale i tak to jest zle slowo). Even some critics 'percived' (ortog) (tutaj brak 'the film') AS 'the' (zly przedimek) bad idea 'of' FOR general 'realese' (ortog). "New moon" won 5 Golden Rasberries (nie jestem pewna czy to nei Raspberries) - the opposite 'akwards' (ortog) of (przedimek) Oscars.
Dziękuję :) Wszystkie uwagi były bardzo pomocne :D

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