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Wiem,że mogą być literówki ponieważ przepisywałam tekst z kartki na komputer, a zdarza mi sie gubić literki albo je po prostu zamieniać :)
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It was hot, but rainy weather when we were visiting Luvr in France. I was with my Boyfriend - Jimmy and our dog -Kleo.It was late and we were a little bit hungry. When we finished seeing we saw little and cosy restaurant. We decided to take a break and eat something. We chose place outdoor.Next to our table where a lot of doves. After a while Kleo started barking and jumping becouse one of doves tried to steal she's biscuit. Suddenly Kleo broke off the leash and started raning for dove. We were scared becouse we lost sight of the dog. We went for it. People who have seen it pointed the way which Kleo ran. We were ub the strangest places of Paris. In some streets were even dangerous. We did not know ehere Kleo is gone. It was late and we were tired and far away from the hotel. One women who we asked about our dog, seeing that we are tired offered us place to sleep. We had no another choice. The women, called Anna, was very nice. She made sandwiches for us. While we were eating supper, Anna's son come back from work. That's when we heard the barking dog. Quickly we went into the room where the noise comes. It was our dog! We were supraisted and Kleo began happilu jumping and wagging she's tail. We found that Edward, son of Anna, is a waiter at the restaurant where we ate a meal. When we ran to looking for Kleo, she went come back and was waiting for ua near our table. When Edward finished work, He saw dog and decided to take it home becouse it was late. We were very grateful to him.We stayed in their house for a night, happy that Kleo is with us. It was a very unusual trip. This event caused that we visited the place did not even known about. Fortunately everything ended well.

It was hot, but rainy weather when we were visiting (przedimek) 'Luvr' (ortog) in France.
When we finished 'seeing' (ale co? musisz napisac) we saw (przedimek) little and cosy restaurant. We chose 'place outdoor' (cos tu nie tak, to nie jest pelne zdanie) . Next to our table 'where' (tu masz zle slowo, napisalas 'gdzie') a lot of doves. After a while Kleo started barking and jumping 'becouse' (blad ortog) one of doves tried to steal 'she's' (nie, tutaj masz zle. Napisalas 'ona jest' a ma byc 'jej') biscuit. Suddenly Kleo broke off the leash and started 'raning' (ortog) for (przedimek) dove. We were scared 'becouse' (ortog) we lost sight of the dog. We went for 'it' (nie jest jasne do czego to 'it' sie odnosi). People who have seen 'it' (nie lubie jak na malenkiego pieska ktos mowi 'it', to jest zwierzatko, zywa istotka) pointed the way (cos brak) which Kleo ran. We were 'ub' (ortog) the strangest places of Paris (cos to zfanie jest bardzo dziwne). 'In' (niepotr) Some streets were even dangerous. We did not know 'ehere' (ortog) Kleo 'is' (zle, tutaj HAD) gone.
One 'women' (tutaj ma byc l. poj.) whoM we asked about our dog, seeing that we 'are' WERE tired offered us (przedimek) place to sleep. We had no 'another' (nie, slowo jest 'other') choice. The 'women' (tutaj l. poj), called Anna, was very nice.
While we were eating supper, Anna's son 'come' (zly czas) back from work.
Quickly we went into the room where the noise 'comes' (zle, tutaj 'came from'.).
We were 'supraisted' (ortog) and Kleo began' happilu' (ortog) jumping and wagging 'she's' (znowu napisalas 'ona jest' - to jest zle. Masz na mysle 'jej' tutaj HER) tail. We found that Edward, (przedimek) son of Anna, is a waiter at the restaurant where we ate 'a' (napisalabym THE) meal. When we ran OUT to 'looking' (nie, tutaj 'look') for Kleo, she 'went' 9niepotr) 'come' (zly czas) back and was waiting for 'ua' (ortog) near our table. When Edward finished work, He saw (przedimek) dog and decided to take it home 'becouse' (juz 3ci raz blednie to piszesz. Naucz sie tego na pamiec) it was late.
We stayed in their house for a night, happy that Kleo 'is' (ja dalabym 'was') with us.
This event 'caused' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo) that we visited 'the' (niepotr) placeS WE did not even 'known' (wystarczy 'know') about.