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And to think that only morning I saw my life as being empty and dull!

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It was frosty pre-Christmas morning. This Friday everything was irritate me, mum who was bustling about the flat, my brother who was decorated the Christmas tree…I thought that this day will be monotonous and dull. Only good think that my parents and brother were plan to go to our friend for pre Christmas supper. How ever I deceided that this afternoon sped alone with TV and good horror.
About 16 o`clock my dreams come true- my family walk out! I set down comfortably opposide television and I started watch the movie. When from screen despaired a monster, suddenly I heard panting behind my, which in a flash went quiet… with my heart in my mouth, I slowly turn away mine head. In the some time someone knocked at the door. I grab big wooden mum`s bird and I come to the door. No sooner had I opened than the view making me gosp in horror appeard in front of my eyes…On a doormat was laying a yeloow envelope. My heart was in my mouth. I swallowed hard and I deceided to open this letter… Once more I heard some noises and laugh… all of a sudden in my eyes appeared my family, which were amused this situation, and my dad was asked my: Child po co Ci this bird? And with smie on his faced, he cuddle me. For a moment everybody burst out laughing. And to think that only morning I saw my life as being empty and dull!
It was *a frosty *Christmas Eve morning. *That Friday everything *irritated me: mum who was bustling about the flat, my brother who was *decorating the Christmas tree...I thought that *the day *would be monotonous and dull. *The only good thing *was that my parents and *my brother were *planning to go to our *friend's for * the Christmas Eve supper. I however decided to spend the evening alone with *a good horror on the telly.
About *four o`clock my dreams *came true- my family *went out! I *sat down comfortably opposiTe *the television and I started *watching the movie. When *a monster appeared on the screen, I suddenly heard panting behind *me, which in a flash went quiet... With my heart in my mouth, I slowly *turned around my head. *A moment later someone knocked at the door. I grabBED my mum's big wooden bird and I cAme to the door. No sooner had I opened *it than I saw something that made me gasp in horror... On a doormat *lay a yeloow envelope. My heart was in my mouth. I swallowed hard and I deceided to open *that letter... Once +again+ I heard some noises and *a laughter... all of a sudden* I was facing my family, *who were very amused *by the situation. My dad asked me: "What do you need this bird for, kid?", and with a smile on his face he cuddled me. *Then everybody burst out laughing. And to think that only morning I saw my life as being empty and dull!
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