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And to think that only morning I saw my life as being empty and dull!
Proszę o sprawdzenie i naniesienie poprawek-mam kłopot z akapitami:)
Dziękuję!!!
It was frosty pre-Christmas morning. This Friday everything was irritate me, mum who was bustling about the flat, my brother who was decorated the Christmas tree…I thought that this day will be monotonous and dull. Only good think that my parents and brother were plan to go to our friend for pre Christmas supper. How ever I deceided that this afternoon sped alone with TV and good horror.
About 16 o`clock my dreams come true- my family walk out! I set down comfortably opposide television and I started watch the movie. When from screen despaired a monster, suddenly I heard panting behind my, which in a flash went quiet… with my heart in my mouth, I slowly turn away mine head. In the some time someone knocked at the door. I grab big wooden mum`s bird and I come to the door. No sooner had I opened than the view making me gosp in horror appeard in front of my eyes…On a doormat was laying a yeloow envelope. My heart was in my mouth. I swallowed hard and I deceided to open this letter… Once more I heard some noises and laugh… all of a sudden in my eyes appeared my family, which were amused this situation, and my dad was asked my: Child po co Ci this bird? And with smie on his faced, he cuddle me. For a moment everybody burst out laughing. And to think that only morning I saw my life as being empty and dull!