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It was a cold dark evenig. It was six o'clock and people were going home from work. Vanessa was driving out of the town. she was in hurry up but she wasn't going home. She stopped to buy a bottle of wine, and then got back into the car and continued driving.
She was driving to her friend house to have dinner. Her friend's name was Anna.
Anna lived on the village together with her parent's and older brother Jack.
Vanessa was tired after hard work day and she was carefully behind the wheel.
Unfortunatelly she was very sleepy so she decided made short stop to breathe fresh air. She didn't feel confident. She was herself in this place. She looked that
some dark car stopped near. The tall man got out of car and he went to Vanessa. The girl was very scared. She jumped for her car and she left. She didn't know what she must do. This guy was following her. Vanessa drove very fast. She had hope that the man lost.
When she get to the Anna house, the dark car didn't was here. Vanessa calmy got out of car and she went to door. Suddenly behind house arrived following car. Vanessa screamed: Help me Anna!. The door were closed. The man got out of the car. He had gun and he gone to the Vanessa. All time Vanessa had hope that is only bad dream.
Suddenly the door opened. Out of house run Anna together with her parents.
It turned out that the man who drove dark car is brother Anna, Jack. This situation was planned by Anna. It was only halloween joke.