Opis Festivalu(Wydarzenia) Do sprawdzenia

Witam,
Bardzo bym prosil o sprawdzenie mojego opisu wydarzenia ktory mam do napisania na angielski. Mam sie kierowac 5 punktami w ktorych ma byc zawarte w kazdy z paragrafów.

1 paragraf. description the event,
say why it is speciall
2 paragraf. write about what you did first
3 paragraf. write about what happened
4 paragraf. describe the atmosphere
5 paragraf. give personal comments or opinions

Bardzo bym prosil o szybkie sprawdzenie :)

Last month i went to the Turyn Olimpik game festival with my family and the best friends: Mariusz, Artur and Ola. The festival that proceeds 4 years, presenty in the Intaly now. It is enormaous. This years there were about a one thousand Athletes there. And it was fans a lot in the festival.

We coming at the festival on Thursday night, we found a accomodation free hotel. Next, We have toured Antiques. It is Astonishing, we have met Athletes. After that, we talked to the three am.

On Satyrdaym the Olimpick game started at eighteen night. That festival amazing, it was the best momeny of the all live. It was Adam Małysz, my all-time favourite.

The atmosphere at the Olimpic game was fantastick. People talked to each other and shared food and drink. Sell different devices for spporting also.

I was very unpleasantly when I must to leave at the end of the Olimpic and I hope I will be to go to the Festival again. There was biggest event I have ever been and the best month I have ever had.

Dziekuje za wszelka pomoc :))
Pozdro

podbijam do góry
czekajac na szybko odpowiedz :))

tutaj jeszcze raz poprawilem moje tłumaczonko

Last month i went to the Olympic games festival with my family and the best friends: Mariusz, Artur and Ola. The festival that proceeds 4 years, in Turyn city which is presently in the south-west part of Italy. It is enormous. This years there were about thousand Athletes. And there was a lot of fans in the festival.

We were coming to the festival on Thursday night, we found a accomodation free hotel. Next, We have toured Antiques. It is Astonishing, we have met Athletes. After that, we talked to the three am.

On Saturday the Olympic games started at eighteen night. The festival was amazing, it was the best moment of my life. There was Adam Małysz, my all-time favourite.

The atmosphere at the Olympic games was fantastick. People talked to each other and shared food and drink. Sell different devices for spporting also.

I was very unpleasantly when I must to leave at the end of the Olympic games and I hope I can go to the festival again. It was biggest event, that i have ever been and the best month I have ever had.

jak by mogl jeszcze ktos sprawdzic to jeszcze raz bylo by supcio:)

You recently attended a bizarre local festival. write an article for the school magazine about it. write when and where it takes places then describe the festval activities.Recommend it to the readers(1[tel]words). pomocy!!!!!! jak to napisać...???? proszę o pomoc i przykład w języku angielskim i z tłumaczeniem... proszę

czy mógłby to ktoś sprawidzić plis....