list formalny sprawdzenie i sugestie

witam!
bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie tego listu i o ewentulane sugestie
dziekuje z gory! (list w imieniu dwoch osób)

Dear Mr Zepete

We are writing with regard to your confirmation (21 February 2006), which We have received from Mr. Kowalski. We would like to confirm our arrival. We are arriving to Zaragoza on next Wednesday (15 March 2006, arriving time 12:50 Zaragoza Airport).
We will be very grateful if you can help us to find a permanent or temporary accommodation. We have tried to find an accommodation for 2 weeks but any vacant rooms were being to expensive for us (300euro/month per person).
In according to our arriving, we will be very pleased if you could provide us necessary information to the point of time and place of our meeting.



Yours sincerely

Piotr Kowal
Jacek Placek

Dear Mr Zepete,

We are writing regarding your confirmation (21st February 2006), which we have received from Mr. Kowalski. We would like to confirm our arrival to Zaragoza on next Wednesday (15th March 2006, arriving time 12:50, Zaragoza Airport).

We would be very grateful if you could help us to find a permanent or temporary accommodation. We have tried to find a affordable accommodation however any of the vacant rooms were too expensive for us (300 euro per person per month).

Due to our arrival we would be very pleased if you could provide us with necessary information about the place and time and place of our meeting.


Yours sincerely

Piotr Kowal
Jacek Placek

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i'm not sure about the 'euro' stuff. Good luck!

powinno byc Mr. (z kropka)...

X

znalazłem jeszcze pewne usterki:-))

We are writing regarding - with reference to your
or temporary accommodation - or A
find a affordable accommodation however - find AN...., however,(przecinki, przecinki:-)))
any of the vacant rooms - all of the...
Due to our arrival- considering...
and place of our meeting.- ...as well as the meeting place

pozdrawiam:-))

as well as our (zamiast the:))) meeting place