please, check it!

Będę b. wdzięczna gdy kyoś zerknie na tę pracę i zechce ją sprawdzić :)
my room.... It`s the most important place for me in my house. I have a lot happy and sad memories of time spent there: birthday parties, preparing to exams at night. When I return home I always take a rest there. When I`m at home I spend most of the time in my room. When I look for serenity I can always find it there. In the rest of the rooms I don`t have anything to do, but in my room I always have a lot of to work. So what does this special room look like? It`s quite big. On the left, there is some furniture. In front of furniture there is a desk which is very often untidy, but sometimes it looks very nice and clean. The window is very big and that`s why my room is very bright. Next to the window there is a computer. Then there is my bed, which looks pretty nice especially when it`s clean. Above the bed there's a map of Poland. Farther stands a cupboard with many shelves. In the cupboard there are a lot of books. Two comfortable armchairs stand in the corner. Next to the window there is a big aquarium that is the most beautiful decoration of my room. Photos of me and my friends hang on the wall . On the floor there is a lovely carpet. The whole room is decorated with plants. Generally, I think that my room is the best room in the world especially when it`s clean, but even when it's dirty I like to spend time there.

Zawsze zastanawiam się dlaczego jednym ludziom sprwdzacie prace a innym nie? nie znacie kogoś to już nie możecie sprawdzić, sama jestem na etapie nauki j. ang. i nie odważyłabym się na razie spr. czyjeś prace, ale niektórzy z was to stali forumowicze, jakim kluczem się posługujecie kiedy wybieracie pracę do spr? Zastanówcie się na tym i sprawdzie tej Izie czy jak jej tam, bo nie ma żadnego wpisu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>nie znacie kogoś to już nie możecie sprawdzić

Nie znam nikogo na tym forum a sprawdzam jeśli mam akurat czas, a takie teksty jak Twoje nie mają żadnego sensu. Nie płacą nam za to, że sprawdzimy czy napiszemy komuś pracę, robimy to z własnych chęci i nikt nie ma prawa oczekiwać od nas pomocy zawsze i w każdym przypadku, ani robić nam z tego powodu wyrzuty. Już kolejny raz widzę podobny wpis, więc proszę, daruj sobie bo tym możesz jedynie zniechęcić. A tym bardziej, że czasem nad sprawdzeniem siedzi się więcej niż 10 minut, a nawet tyle nie zdążyło minąć do Twojego wpisu.

jesli to Twoj dom rodzinyn nazwałby go raczej "at my home" " i have lot of happy..." "always when i return home i take ... " "find it here..." " there is nothing to do for me in the rest of rooms, but in my room i have lot of to work" there is a desk in from of it"
"there is a computer next to the window " przy formie there is there are miejsce zawsze idzie na koniec zdania - the bed there's a
>map of Poland cupboard there are a lot of books. i tutaj Next to the window there is a big aquarium that is the
>most beautiful decoration of my room i tu :) dobra szef przyszedl, dalej moze ktos Ci pomoże powodzonka cya

my room.... It's the most important place for me in my house. I have a lot {of} happy and sad memories of {the} time spent there: birthday parties, preparing to exams at night. When I return home I always take a rest there. When I'm at home I spend most of the time in my room. When I look for serenity I can always find it there. In the {other} rooms I don't have anything to do, but in my room I always have a lot of to {do}/{... have a lot of work to do}. So what does this special room look like? It's quite big. On the left, there is some furniture. In front of {the} furniture there is a desk which is very often untidy, but sometimes it looks very nice and clean. The window is very big and that's why my room is very bright. Next to the window there is a computer. Then there is my bed, which looks pretty nice especially when it's clean. Above the bed there's a map of Poland. Farther {on} stands a cupboard with many shelves. In the cupboard there are a lot of books. Two comfortable armchairs stand in the corner. Next to the window there is a big aquarium that is the most beautiful decoration of my room. {Some} photos of me and my friends hang on the wall . On the floor there is a lovely carpet. The whole room is decorated with plants. Generally, I think that my room is the best room in the world, especially when it's clean, but even when it's dirty I like to spend time there.

I would say you've done a good job... Jolly good show!

my room.... It`s the most important place for me in my house (a nie lepiej by brzmiało "for me" na końcu zdania?). I have a lot OF happy and sad memories of time spent there: birthday parties, preparing to exams at night. When I return (albo "come back") home I always take a rest there. When I`m at home I spend most of the time in my room. When I look for serenity I can always find it there. In the rest of the rooms (In other rooms) I don`t have anything to do, but in my room I always have a lot of (bez "to") work. So HOW does this special room look like? It`s quite big. On the left, there is some furniture. In front of furniture there is a desk which is very often untidy, but sometimes it looks very nice and clean. The window is very big and that`s why my room is very bright. Next to the window there is a computer. Then there is my bed, which looks pretty nice, especially when it`s clean. Above the bed there's a map of Poland. Farther stands a cupboard with many shelves. In the cupboard there are MANY (a lot of jest chyba tylko dla niepoliczalnych... zawsze mi się to myli) books. Two comfortable armchairs stand in the corner. Next to the window there is a big aquarium that (/which) is the most beautiful decoration of my room. Photos of me and my friends hang on the wall. On the floor there is a lovely carpet. The whole room is decorated with plants. Generally, I think that my room is the best room in the world, especially when it`s clean, but even when it's dirty I like to spend time there. (intuicyjnie lepiej mi brzmi "I like spending time there")

Usunęłabym też formy ściągnięte.

Przy okazji mam pytanie. Kiedy napisać "I like to do sth" a kiedy "I like doing sth"?

jak dla mnie to pewnie jakies rweguly sa ale uzywane jest zamiennie i rownoznacznie wiec chyba to nie robi wiekszej roznicy :)

pozdrowionka

We use [like/hate/love doing something ] or [like/hate/love to do something ] (with no change of meaning) when the action referred to is somehow repeated or when we talk about something in general, e.g.
I love meeting people.
I love to meet people.
She hates flying.
She hates to fly.

But you should use:
1) like to do something = I feel it is a good thing to do, but I don't necessarily enjoy it, e.g.
'It's not my favourite job, but I like to clean the bathroom as often as possible.'
If you enjoy it then you say:
'I like cleaning the bathroom very much. It's really relaxing.'
2) like to do something = when we do something on a special occasion
'When I travel to work by train I like to read a book.' = (I don't travel by train very often)
If you always travel to work by train then you say:
'I like reading a book while travelling to work.'
3) like doing something = when we refer to a situation that is still true
I like being a student. (=I am a student - I like it)
Lee lives in Boston. He likes living there. = (She likes living in Boston - she lives there and she likes it)
Tom is a lorry driver. He likes driving big cars. = (He always drives lorries)
Sally likes to ride to work on a motorbike, but she usually drives her car. = (She doesn't often ride her motorbike)

As for 'a lot of' - it is used with both uncountable and countable plural nouns, e.g.
a lot of chickens
a lot of white meat
a lot of banknotes
a lot of money