Prosze o mala pomoc

Hej....Mam mały problem...czy zdania podane poniżej są poprawnie skonstruowane?
1. I received that diploma for Third Place in SHOT PUT in Girls Category in 4th Communal “Gimnazjada" about the Mayor Cup of Krakow. One year later, I scored Golden Medal in the same competition.
2. I received that diploma for First Place in Vacation Tournament “KARATE KYOUKUSHIN" in category of “KATA".
3. I received that diploma for Third Place in 3rd Championship of Krakow “KARATE KYOUKUSHIN" in category of “KATA".
PLEASE HELP ME :(:(

A dlaczego mowisz 'that diploma' -
wg mnie to lepiej - 'achieved' jak received
I received a Diploma for Third Place in Shot put in the Girls (chyba lepiej Women) category in 4th .....
One year later, I achieved a Golden Medal...

musze opisac czego dotycza konkretne dyplomy na kopiach, stąd to "that"... Dziękuję za pomoc :) a tam te pozosłe rozumiem że wszystko ok? (no oprócz tych tych samych błędów co w pierwszym zadaniu)....:)

jest ok
pzdr

mozna tez powiedziec - I achieved this particular Diploma in......

Mam jeszcze jedno pytanko -a czy te zdania są poprawne?

1.Math and Informatics Department on University of Mikołaj Kopernik in Torun and Association Kangourou sans Frontieres donated me a Diploma for a good result in the International Contest “Mathematical Kangaroo”.

2.I received a Diploma for share in 21st Contest of Modern Poetry.

............Frontieres rewarded me with a Diploma for a good result in....
I received a Diploma for participation in 21st Contest of Modern Poetry.

A to -Torun and Association Kangourou sans Frontieres - to juz jest taka nazwa czy sama to przetlumaczylas???
pzdr

Dziękuję :):):)
Taka jest nazwa :):):)