Dwa zdania- proszę bardzo o poprawienie

Mozesz mi poprawic błędy ? Będę badzo wdzieczna
Peter, I don't want to make you any problems . If you want please - only look at this website and write me what do you think about this hotels ? Is booking on-line on this website is safety ?
Serdecznie dziękuję :)

Peter, I don't want to make you any problems. If you {could} please only look at this website and write {to} me what {} you think about {the/those} hotels? Is {the on-line hotel bookings system safe} on this website?

A moze tak:
Peter, I don't want to make any problems for you. If you could look on this website and write me what you think about these hotels.

Wow, I'm all for your version, terry - simple and concise... ;-}

Duze buziaczki dla Was - dziękuję bardzo !!!