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Mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić moją rolę;))

K: Apologies for absence were received from Mr Goraj. He is in Germany on a business trip.
K: Well, I would like to know is it possible to buy new car for the company? The car I’m using now is too slow to get to the clients on time.
K: Our aim objective this morning is to discuss the reason of falling profits in our company
K:I don’t agree with you. I think that it will put the company too a lot of expense. In my opinion it will be better change the parts of machines which aften broke . To oszczędzi nam wydatków
K: And what about prices? Don’t you think our prices are too high?
K: I think we should also…
K: Ok, I’m sorry
K: Yes, actually I know to be the most succesfull we should advertise on the all media. I think people should know about our awards, we can inform them with Tv help. I think it will be good advertise our products during the most popular soap-operas for example Zbuntowany aniol. Moreover we should advertise our luxury products on newspapers. Does against?
K: I think we should inwert on existing gropu (s) of cafes. I mean became a partner in cafes which are well know, for example Café Roma which could sell and promote our chocolates.
K: I think it’s a good idea. To znajdzie uznanie na rynku, wzmocni nas wizerunek, powinniśmy dbać o zdrowie naszych klientów..
K: I don’t agree with you. We shouldn’t change our packaging. I think people get used to the packaging we have now.
K: Yes, I think we should stay with our packaging.
bardzo proszę jeszce raz o poprawę
nadal proszę o pomoc, bardzo pilne, na wczoraj;)
Hej, nadal jest mi to bardzo potrzebne. Czy mógłby ktoś na to rzucić okiem, czy jest poprawnie?? Bardzo mi na tym zależy .
troszeczke
...I would like to know IF it is possible to buy a new car...
...to get to clients on time (bez 'the')
I think that this will put the company to a lot of expense. ...it will be better to change the machine parts which often brake. This will save on our costs.
...Do you think that our prices are too high?
...we should advertise in all the media. ......we can inform them with the help of the TV.
..it will be good to advertise our products...
...advertise our luxury products IN newspapers.
Those against? (nie 'does')
...we should invest in the existing group of cafes. ...become a partner in a well known chain of cafes such as Cafe..
Dziękuje terri za pomoc, teraz proszę o sprawdzenie końcówki, bo to co Terri powiedziałą to poprawiłam

K: Apologies for absence were received from Mr Goraj. He is in Germany on a business trip.

K: Well, I would like to know if it is possible to buy a new car for the company? The car I'm using now is too slow to get to clients on time.

K: Our aim objective this morning is to discuss the reason of falling profits in our company

K:I don't agree with you. I think that this will put the company too a lot of expense. In my opinion it will be better change the machine parts which often brake . It will save on our costs.

K: And what about prices? Don't you think our prices are too high?

K: I think we should also...

K: Ok, I'm sorry

K: Yes, actually I know. To be the most succesfull we should advertise in all the media. I think people should know about our awards, we can inform them with the help of theTV. I think it will be good to advertise our products during the most popular soap-operas for example Zbuntowany aniol. Moreover we should advertise our luxury products in newspapers. Does against? / Ktoś przeciw?

K: I think we should inwest in the existing gropu of cafes. I mean become a partner in a well known chain of cafes, such as Café Roma which could sell and promote our chocolates.

K: I think it's a good idea. To znajdzie uznanie na rynku, wzmocni nas wizerunek, powinniśmy dbać o zdrowie naszych klientów..

K: I don't agree with you. We shouldn't change our packaging. I think people get used to the packaging we have now.

K: Yes, I think we should stay with our packaging.
teraz lepiej - zdanie -
I think that this will put the company TO (jedno 'o') a lot... In my opinion it will be better TO change ....parts which often break.
successful -
Those against -
sorry - powinno byc 'break' - (nie brake - jak w pierwszym) nie zauwazylam tego.
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