O Sprawdzenie Prosze ;(

mam temat do rozwiniecia...na max 50 slow..
I'm learning English because I would like to .... Prosze o sprawdzenie.. Mile widziane poprawki i jakies rady albo pomsyly :) dziekuje

I'm learning English because I'd like to improve it. This language is very important for me because our world is globalized and English is the language spoken...(w ktorym wszyscy sie porozumiewaja). I need it to communicate with other people all over the world. I'm a open person I love meeting new people. Moreover I like to travel and I want to speak and understand people everywhere I go. Also, I intend to take some courses abroad.

I'm learning English because I'd like to improve it. This language is very important for me because our world is {being} globalized and English is the language {that is} spoken {almost by everyone to communicate}. I need it to {talk} with other people all over the world. I'm {an} open person {and} I love meeting new people. Moreover, I like to travel and I want to speak and understand people everywhere I go. I {also} intend to take some courses abroad.

a moze tak:
This language is very important to me because globalization has caused English to become the language of mass communication.

dziekuje zaaaaaaa pomoc .. naprawde doceniam wasze poswiecenie :)rnbuziaki dla was:***