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Every year thousands of chindren submit to accidents at home. Small children are at great risk. They have more accidents than older. The most frequent are failling, nurns, drowings, chokings and poisonings. To prevent people should construct safequards. For ex. on stairs we could make a safety gates. The cupboards and drawers can be secured by safety catches. Against the electrocuted safety covers should be put on.
Chemicals, cleaning products, irons and knives should be locked of the cupboards, out of the reach of children. Its our duty to protect them from dangerous accidents which change their lifes for worst.

troszeczke uwag -
submit - zle slowo
They have more accidents than older .......kto?
The most frequent co? ....are falling (nie failing) (z kad - gdzie?)
burns, drownings (nie drowings)
To prevent co? people should....
For ex. (co to jest ex?) we could make a safety gate/guard.
Against the electrocuted - nie - To prevent electrocution safety covers should be put on what?
...should be locked out of children's reach. It is (nie its) ...change their lives for worst - w jaki sposob?

a co bedzie lepsza zamiest "submit"?
>They have more accidents than older .......kto? -children

Tam gdzie ci zwrocilam uwage to znaczy, ze cos tam brakuje.

thousands of children have accidents