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Good Morning!

My name is XXX.
I'm going to fly with Ryanair from Airport Wrocław-Strachowice for Shannon, on 02.09.2006.
I have some questions about my fly.
-Are some change about date or time flight for Shannon?
-Are some change about hand luggage in fly for Shannon?
-What can I take (can't I take) in my hand luggage on layer plane?

Thank You for Answers!

Your sincerely
XXX

I intend to fly with Ryanair from Airport Wrocław-Strachowice BOUND for
Shannon, IRELAND on 02.09.2006.
However, I have some questions regarding my FLIGHT.
Are THERE ANY changeS TO the date or time of this flight?
What are the allowances for hand luggage?
What can I take in my hand luggage on board the plane?
Thank you ('you' pisze sie mala litera) for your answers.
YourS sincerely
Jak raz napiszesz gdzie lecisz to nie trzeba tego powtarzac w kazdym zdaniu.

What can I take in my hand luggage on board the plane?
...................................on the board? ('the plane' -zbyteczne)

tak - mozna bez 'the plane'. Ale ...'on board' nie 'on the board'.

Jasne!
Można również czasownikowo: 'What can I board as my hand luggage?
Pzdr :)

Serdecznie Wam dziękuje! :))