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Dear Paul,
Thanks very much for uour letter. I heven't written in a long time but I've been very busy. I'm writting to you because I miss you!
Anyway I have got some bad news. When I come back to home from you by car I have accident. I ran out of patrol. I had stay in the middle of nowhere. I called about the help for 1 haur. Fortunately I met man who take me patrol. I lost 2 haurs by this accident.
Now I have got good news. I have a brother. I and my parents are very happy. He has got 1 months old and he is beautiful.
Thanks very much for stay with you.
hope to see you in a short time.
You must visit me, when you will be in Poland. You must meet my family!
Lots of love,
XYZ

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i haven't written for a long time.
when i was coming back home i had an accident. i was in he middle...
i called for help for an hour
i met a man who gave me some petrol
he is 1 month old


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Dear Paul,
Thank you for your letter. I haven't written for a long time because I was very busy. Now, I am writing to you just because I miss you!
Unfortunately, I have bad news. When I was coming back home from your place, I had some problems. I ran out of petrol. I had to stay in the middle of nowhere. I was trying to call for any help for about an hour. Finally, I met a man who gave me some petrol. I lost almost two hours because of this situation.
I also have good news. I have a brother! My parents and I are very happy. He IS one month old and he is a really beautiful child.
I am glad that we could spend a few days together.
I hope to see you again in a short time.
You should visit me when you come to Poland. You must meet my family.
Love,
XXX

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